范文1
My Best Friend
My best friend is one of my classmates. Her name is Mary. Every day, we go to school together and go back home together. We often help each other and learn from each other in study. We have the same hobby-collecting stamps. She has many nice stamps. She is very proud of them. Sometimes she gives some of them to me. I think she is a very- good girl. We will be good friends forever.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇記人的敘述文。先交代了My Best Friend是誰(shuí)，接著通過(guò)事例交代了為什么“我們是最好的朋友”。最后闡述了主題。

范文2
My Class Teacher
My class teacher is Mr. Wang. He is strict but kind. He has taught us Chinese for two years. He always tells us to study hard but not all the time. Sometimes he plays with us. He says, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” I think he is a good class teacher.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇文章取材都是身邊熟悉的人，作者也有東西可寫(xiě)，更具有可讀性。另外，寫(xiě)人時(shí)可以把主語(yǔ)稍作調(diào)整，讀起來(lái)輕松多了。

I am a 15-year-old girl. My name is Cherry. Now I am studying in the middle school.1 want to be an actress because I think It is a funny and exciting job...

寫(xiě)事一定要交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、情節(jié)。常用的句型如：
It took place/happened…
Last/week/year/Monday/Tuesday...
One Friday morning．．

范文3
Our Class Meeting
Last Friday afternoon we had our last class meeting in our classroom. All the students and our class teacher took part in it. We held a warm discussion about our future life. Each of us spoke at the meeting actively. After the discussion, we all decided to study hard so as to make our life better and better.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇文章條理清楚，記敘完整，短短的五句話(huà)有簡(jiǎn)單句，也有復(fù)合句，交代了時(shí)間、
地點(diǎn)、人物、原因、經(jīng)過(guò)、結(jié)果等六要素。

范文4
Hot Springs Let Me Have A Rest
We took off our coats and ran quickly into the lemon spring. When I first put my feet into the water. I cried out, "Wow, it is hot!”I didn't know the water was so hot, and I was a little afraid that it would burn me... So I walked carefully into the spring. One step, two... I felt the heat slowly climbing up my body.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：要寫(xiě)出生動(dòng)有趣的事，除了把事情的來(lái)龍去脈說(shuō)清楚，還一定要注意增加文章的細(xì)節(jié)，這是必不可少的，豐富的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)能為你的文章增色不少，使人讀起來(lái)具有一種身臨其境的感覺(jué)。