3.北京卷

書面表達(dá)(共兩節(jié),35分)第一節(jié)情景作文(20分)
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二(1)班的學(xué)生李華,利用上周末的時(shí)間幫助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫一篇英文周記,敘述你從準(zhǔn)備到送行的全過程。
注意:
1.周記的開頭已為你寫好。
2.詞數(shù)不少于60。

Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Bedside.

基本分析:
1. 文體:周記。 2. 人稱:I 3. 時(shí)態(tài):一般過去時(shí)
4. 事件大意:我為爺爺奶奶準(zhǔn)備出行+我送行 5. 圖片要素:
圖一:查詢信息(train ticket, weather, hotel) 圖二:買票(buy ticket)
圖三:準(zhǔn)備行裝(package) 圖四:送行(see-off)
3. 圖片關(guān)聯(lián):
圖一、二、三都是并列關(guān)系,主題是旅游前的準(zhǔn)備階段,三幅圖沒有輕重之分,所占篇幅比例相當(dāng)。圖四是最后的送別階段,文章末尾要有點(diǎn)睛之筆,可以是送別感受,對爺爺奶奶的祝福,也可以是自己的成長和收獲。
4. 文章立意:
今年的作文和90后的學(xué)生特點(diǎn)相聯(lián)系,積極引導(dǎo)高中學(xué)生要培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立性,增加實(shí)踐能力,并要照顧體諒長輩。所以文章末尾的立意也可以往這方面考慮。

【參考范文】
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Bedside. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Bedside, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.

第二節(jié)開放作文(15分)
請根據(jù)下面提示,寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

基本分析:
1. 三分之一描寫要點(diǎn):陽光,樓(很靠近),彎曲的樹。(the sun, two apartments/ flats
closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree)
2. 三分之二議論著眼立意:
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1.人生角度:在成長的道路上(樹的成長),有曲折,有困難,(建筑的阻擋,彎曲)但是只要向著光明和希望(太陽)去努力拼搏,堅(jiān)持不懈,還是能夠沖破桎梏取得成功(樹在樓的夾縫中長高了,超出建筑)。
2.和諧角度: 城市的發(fā)展(建筑)和環(huán)境的可持續(xù)發(fā)展(樹的成長)要協(xié)調(diào),要平衡,才能欣然共存(在陽光下)
3. 立意與現(xiàn)實(shí)生活關(guān)系:1. 引導(dǎo)90后要具有積極的生活態(tài)度,生活非一帆風(fēng)順的。2. 扣住低碳生活的環(huán)保熱點(diǎn),城市和環(huán)境的和諧發(fā)展也是低碳生活的必需。

【參考范文】
In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable condition. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does。