2010年全國(guó)高考英語(yǔ)作文題匯編
18.重慶卷
假設(shè)你是李華,于2010年6月3日搭乘國(guó)外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回國(guó)后,發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一個(gè)行李箱(suitcase)。現(xiàn)請(qǐng)用英文給該航空公司寫(xiě)一封信,請(qǐng)他們幫你尋找。
信件要點(diǎn)包括:
l 陳述寫(xiě)信原因
l 簡(jiǎn)要描述該行李
l 說(shuō)明其重要性
l 期待回復(fù)并表示感謝
注意:
1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 信件格式已給出。3. 請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
試題為應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信寫(xiě)作,試題只給出寫(xiě)作框架,并未給出所有的具體寫(xiě)作細(xì)節(jié),為半開(kāi)放性寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)好此文,需注意三點(diǎn):一是寫(xiě)信格式要準(zhǔn)確,信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,但切要寫(xiě)好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當(dāng),本文應(yīng)重點(diǎn)寫(xiě)的是對(duì)箱子的描述。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié),恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過(guò)渡詞,以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】(1)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suitcase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.
My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it. It is really important for me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it is what my father sent to me on my birthday.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【參考范文】(2 )
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very sorry to say that I left my suitcase in flight number BA793 on 3rd, June, so I am writing this letter to ask you for help.The lost suitcase is a red one with a long handle. It is of great importance to me. In it are some valuable books and my credit cards. I will be very grateful if anyone of you contact me by telephone immediately after seeing it. My telephone number is 133456. There is nothing more gratifying to me than your reply.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】
文章要點(diǎn)齊全,寫(xiě)作層次清晰,緊扣要點(diǎn)框架并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),行文連貫,句式多變,能夠正確運(yùn)用各種復(fù)合句,對(duì)箱子的描述恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w。?