11.安徽卷

假設(shè)你將參加某英語雜志社開展的一次征文活動(dòng)，征文的內(nèi)容要求你在電視、手機(jī)（cell）和網(wǎng)絡(luò)三者中，放棄其中一個(gè)并陳述理由。請你以“Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web?”為題，寫一篇英語短文。
注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)100左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【解題指導(dǎo)】
這是一篇半開放式的作文，考生有發(fā)揮的余地。考生應(yīng)注意審題準(zhǔn)確，要求選擇放棄其中的一個(gè)，這就要求考生寫前列舉出放棄的理由，用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞將理由巧妙地連起來，使行文流暢，同時(shí)也要注意長短句結(jié)合并使用高級詞匯，以提高文章的檔次。

【參考范文】
We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cells and the Web are widely used. It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.
However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy, and there’re too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the internet .

【范文點(diǎn)評】
本文層次清晰。第一段提出了文章的主題，第二段提出放棄的選擇并闡述理由，第三段說明了保留另外兩個(gè)選項(xiàng)的原因，這三段用了連詞however , as for 使段落銜接自然。在文章中，作者用了定語從句 in which TV , cells….、虛擬語氣、rather than 、原因狀語從句等復(fù)雜的句式,句子長短結(jié)合，語言流暢，充分展示了作者寫作功底。?