名師指導(dǎo):托福雅思作文的起承轉(zhuǎn)合
舉例雅思與托福類似真題:男女合校對(duì)分校的立場(chǎng)沖突。
雅思IELTS Topic>What are the pros and cons of co-educational schooling? Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Provide reasons and examples from your knowledge and experience.
托福TOEFL Topic>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
>起段開頭三句話--Introduction: from general to specific
I. 申論主題--中學(xué)男女合校制度利少弊多
--Stating your thesis
The effort to introduce female students into male secondary schools, or vice versa, must be regarded as undesirable because the
practice has not been working well.?
II. 集中焦點(diǎn)--立場(chǎng)的沖突
--Narrowing your thesis into your focus
Beyond the religious and cultural grounds, there are other issues about co-education that need to be analyzed.?
III. 一分為二 --道德敗壞,學(xué)業(yè)退步
--Organizing your focus into points of conflict
Of all the obvious drawbacks about mixed-sex educational system, the decline of moral principles and the fall of academic performance have raised particular concern.
>合段結(jié)尾三句話--Conclusion: from specific to general
I. 二合為一 --道德敗壞,學(xué)業(yè)退步
--Summarizing points of view into your focus
Not surprisingly, from the moral or academic point of view, voices are increasingly being heard to escalate support for single-sex schooling.
II. 還原焦點(diǎn)--立場(chǎng)的沖突
--Widening your focus to the scope of your thesis
It has been more evident that to sacrifice physical and mental differences for artificial gender equality is probably not the right policy to run teenage education in general.?
III. 重申主題--男女合校壞處多
--Restating your thesis
As can be imagined, sending immature boys and girls to attend the co-ed schools is likely to cause hidden costs to society.