英語四級作文秘籍：20個(gè)萬能句+40個(gè)替換詞，穩(wěn)過~

作者：滬江英語四六級微信公眾號 2024-11-19 09:55

很多學(xué)霸在分享他們的高分經(jīng)驗(yàn)時(shí)，都會(huì)提到用作文模板的好處：

用模板可能保險(xiǎn)一點(diǎn)兒，因?yàn)槟０宓暮锰幘褪侵辽俦ＷC語法沒錯(cuò)誤、拼寫沒錯(cuò)誤，至少可以保證作文及格，再加上其他題型好好做，過級問題不大。

顧慮：全用模板，老師覺得全國同學(xué)千篇一律，不給高分。

得出的結(jié)論：用模板的技巧就是別跟全國同學(xué)太統(tǒng)一。

因此，@滬江英語四六級微信公眾號給大家?guī)砹怂牧墝懽饕欢〞?huì)用到的起承轉(zhuǎn)合最經(jīng)典的功能句，同時(shí)，還給大家準(zhǔn)備了寫作最常用的40個(gè)替換詞，讓文章富于變化。

離四六級考試還有27天了，貪多嚼不爛，模板在精不在多，只背對的！

四六級寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

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（來源：2016版四六級考試大綱）

四六級寫作要拿高分，詞匯要富于變化。其中，常用詞的多樣性變化是大家最關(guān)心的。

就拿最簡單的“好”來舉例子，大家都會(huì)用good，但是全文10幾個(gè)good的作文可能最多得8分，而其他關(guān)于好的表達(dá)“effective”,"active" "beneficial"等可能得11分哦~

因此，@滬江英語四六級微信公眾號整理了40多個(gè)四六級寫作中最常用到的詞語，還配上了從簡單到高級的替換詞匯~~?

滿滿的干貨，請接招！

１?形容詞

1. 貧窮的：

poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken?

2. 富裕的：

rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off?

3. 優(yōu)秀的：

excellent = eminent = top = outstanding?

4. 積極的，好的：

good = conducive = beneficial=advantageous?

5. 消極的，不良的：

bad = detrimental= baneful =undesirable?

6. 明顯的：

obvious = apparent = evident =manifest?

7. 健康的:?

healthy = robust = sound = wholesome?

8. 驚人的：

surprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculous?

9. 美麗的：

beautiful = attractive = gorgeous = eye-catching

10. 有活力的：

energetic = dynamic = vigorous =animated?

11. 流行的：?

popular = prevailing = prevalent= pervasive

２動(dòng)詞

1. 提高，加強(qiáng)：

improve = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimize?

2. 引起：

cause = trigger = endanger?

3. 解決：

solve =resolve =address = tackle =cope with = deal with

4. 拆除：

destroy = tear down = knock down = eradicate?

5. 培養(yǎng):?

develop = cultivate = foster = nurture?

6. 激發(fā)，鼓勵(lì)：

encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur

7. 認(rèn)為：

think = assert= hold = claim = argue?

8. 完成：

complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve?

9. 保留：

keep = preserve = retain = hold?

10. 有害于：

destroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize?

11. 減輕:?

ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten?

３名詞?

1. 影響：　

influence= impact?

2. 危險(xiǎn)：

danger = perils =hazard?

3. 污染：

pollution = contamination

4. 人類：

human beings= mankind = human race?

5. 老人：?

old people= the old = the elderly = the aged = senior citizens

6. 幸福：

happiness = cheerfulness = well-being?

7. 老師：

teachers = instructors = educators = lecturers?

8. 教育：

education = schooling = family parenting = upbringing?

9. 青少年：

young people = youngsters = youths = adolescents?

10. 優(yōu)點(diǎn)：

advantage = merits = superiority = virtue

11. 責(zé)任：?

responsibility = obligation = duty = liability?

12. 能力：?

ability = capacity = power = skill?

13. 職業(yè)：?

job = career = employment = profession?

14. 娛樂：?

enjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainment

15. 孩子：?

children = offspring = descendant= kid?

４短語?

１．充滿了：

be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated with?

2. 努力：

struggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for?

3. 從事：?

embark on = take up = set about = go in for

4. 在當(dāng)代:?

in contemporary society = in present-day society= in this day and age?

5. 大量的:?

a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of?

下面是本文的第二部分：點(diǎn)擊量超過10W+的經(jīng)典作文模板↓

一、用于作文開頭的萬能模板

1、Many people insist that... 很多人(堅(jiān)持)認(rèn)為……

這句話乍看沒亮點(diǎn)，但將眾人皆知的"think"換為"insist"有沒有覺得高大上了許多？

2、With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that... 隨著科技的發(fā)展,越來越多的人認(rèn)為……

這個(gè)可是@滬江英語四六級微信公眾號當(dāng)年的"殺手锏"啊，雖談不上洋氣，但正確率百分百啊，還超好記！

3、A lot of people seem to think that... 很多人似乎認(rèn)為……

"think"終于閃亮登場，但"seem to"為整個(gè)句子增添了點(diǎn)婉轉(zhuǎn)之感，這種客觀的方式貌似較受老外（尤其腐國人）喜愛。

二、引出不同觀點(diǎn)的萬能模板

1、People's views on... vary from person to person. Some hold that... . However, others believe that.... 人們對……的觀點(diǎn)因人而異。有些人認(rèn)為.....然而其他人卻認(rèn)為……

看這個(gè)長度就已然鶴立雞群。其實(shí)，也是一個(gè)蠻簡單也好記的模板。

2、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人們對待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異。

乍一看，跟上句的開頭神似，其實(shí)就是省略掉了"people's"，不僅清爽而且好像高端了一些。

3、People may have different opinions on... 人們對……可能會(huì)有不同的見解。

又是一個(gè)婉轉(zhuǎn)的句子，展示其客觀性。

4、There are different opinions among people as to... 關(guān)于……人們的觀點(diǎn)大不相同。

"different"雖拉低了水準(zhǔn)，但"as to"又拯救了回來。

5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 對(失敗)人們的態(tài)度各不相同。

這句話貌似亮點(diǎn)不多，頂多一個(gè)"hold"，但也是安全牌，容易理解。

三、得出最終結(jié)論的萬能模板

1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that... 把所有這些因素加以考慮，我們自然會(huì)得出結(jié)論……

很完全的答法，"take sth into consideration"短語的應(yīng)用，加分。

2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that... 考慮所有這些因素，我們可能會(huì)得出合理的結(jié)論……

"Take into account sth"短語似乎又比上句的"take sth into consideration"提升了一個(gè)層次。注意這里修飾的副詞表達(dá)的不同含義，有選擇地使用。

3、Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that... 因此，自然我們得出以下結(jié)論……

"Hence"一詞用在文章中大氣吧，但平時(shí)口語中別用，否則即使老外也會(huì)用一種看老古董的眼神看你。

@滬江英語四六級微信公眾號再特意提一句："we'd better"在這里不是“不得不”或“最好”的意思，而是一種自然而然，水到渠成的得出結(jié)論。

4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫無疑問，跳槽有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn)。

短語"there is no doubt that"上線，同時(shí)運(yùn)用我們的老朋友"as well as"增加看點(diǎn)。

5、All in all, we cannot live without... But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 總之，我們沒有……是無法生活的。但同時(shí)，我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對付可能出現(xiàn)的新問題。

這句話一般用于作文結(jié)尾，屬萬能句式，句式較為簡單，方便操作。

四、提出最終建議的萬能模板

1、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 該是我們停止這一趨勢的時(shí)候了。

"It is high time" 打頭，為該句增色。注：that 后跟虛擬語氣，后跟動(dòng)詞的一般過去式，表示“是某人做……的時(shí)候了”或者“是某人不做……的時(shí)候了”

2、It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ... 該是采納……的建議，并對……的進(jìn)展給予非常重視的時(shí)候了。

去掉一個(gè)"high"，畫風(fēng)完全不一樣，不用過去式，只需用"to do"來替代。

3、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ... 毫無疑問，對……問題應(yīng)予以足夠的重視。

"there is no doubt that"+被動(dòng)還是蠻經(jīng)典的組合。英語多被動(dòng)，be paid to用在這里會(huì)顯得地道許多。

4、Obviously,.... If we want to do something... , it is essential that... 顯然，如果我們想做某事，我們需要……

這句有些老生常談，稍微不“?！钡木褪?essential" 替代了"important"。

5、Only in this way can we... 只有這樣,我們才能...

Only+倒裝，經(jīng)典萬能句式，還能看出點(diǎn)水平呢。