2021年6月四級寫作解析

這次四級寫作難度適中，主題偏科技，包括網(wǎng)絡游戲中的暴力場景對現(xiàn)實行為的影響，對電腦或科技的過度依賴。屬于問題類話題。考生可以從列舉現(xiàn)象，分析原因，給出解決辦法3方面來寫。

作文采用了老師在直播中一再強調(diào)的三步走（總分總）的寫作框架。第一段引出現(xiàn)象，提出觀點；第二段分析原因或給出解決方法；第三段總結(jié)概括。

這里是一篇范文供大家參考。

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Nowadays, there has been a heated debate over whether violence depicted in video games can trigger real-world violence. Views on the topic vary greatly. Some believe that video games are harmless, but others are concerned that it might lead to violent behaviors among youngsters.

I agree with the latter, and there are two major reasons. Firstly, unlike TV or books, video games are more interactive, thus those who play video games are more likely to be fully engaged, so they probably are unable to tell the difference between the virtual world and the reality. Secondly, children are not as self-disciplined as adults, video games with violence contents can have negative effects on their developing minds. It is possible that they get aggressive in real life.

From my perspective, it is crucial that the government should regulate the production and sale of violent video games. What’s more, parents should play an active role in creating a healthy environment for their children. Only by doing so can we ensure the healthy development of children.

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范文使用了老師講過的框架。劃線部分是可以套用的模板，大家根據(jù)話題把要展開的內(nèi)容填補進去就可以了。要注意過渡句的適當調(diào)整，比如，中間段如果是解決方法的話，就可以把reasons修改為solutions。

以上，祝大家能夠取得理想的成績。