Dear Wilson,

親愛的威爾森：

I was extremely happy to hear the news of your admission to Yale University last week and I am writing to send my wholehearted congratulations to you.
聽到你上周被耶魯大學(xué)錄取的消息，我非常高興，特寫信向你致以我衷心的祝賀。

As an old saying goes, "No pains, no gains", your success today is closely related with you persistent hard work during the past three years. I hope you will make greater achievement in the university.
正如諺語所說：“不勞無獲”，你今天的成功是與你過去三年堅(jiān)持不懈的努力密切相關(guān)的，希望你在大學(xué)里能取得更大的成就。

Wishing you success and I hope we can keep in close contact.
祝你成功，并保持密切聯(lián)系。

Sincerely yours,
Steven
史蒂芬 謹(jǐn)上上

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