2009年6月四級作文題目

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Free Admission to Museums. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1. 越來越多的博物館免費對外開放的目的是什么？

2. 也會帶來一些問題；

3. 你的看法？

點評：

??? 2009年的四級考試作文沿襲了近幾年四級作文的特點，即問題解決型+觀點對比型的結(jié)合。屬社會類話題，縱觀各個輔導(dǎo)機構(gòu)的預(yù)測作文，沒有人預(yù)測博物館的話題。但是就今年的考題形式而言，三個段落的寫法在課堂上都講到了。下面是分析：

??? 按照課堂所講審題階段應(yīng)該關(guān)注英文標(biāo)題和漢語提綱，即：1）Free Admission to Museums 2）漢語提綱3條。從中可知，核心話題是free admission, 從三個方面來探討這一話題即可。

??? 根據(jù)"先結(jié)構(gòu)后表達"的原則安排段落結(jié)構(gòu)即可做到結(jié)構(gòu)清晰：

??? 先結(jié)構(gòu)：

1、段寫該現(xiàn)象的目的（其實就是好處）；

2、段寫問題（即負面影響）；

3、段寫看法（或解決措施）

?? ?后表達：??

??? 確定好各段結(jié)構(gòu)之后，利用3分鐘時間聯(lián)想各部分可以選用的句式和詞匯表達，并以關(guān)鍵詞的形式列出以幫助自己理順寫作的思維。

　　寫作完成之后，檢查。

??? 下面為用課堂所講套路寫的簡易版本，供大家參考。

??? Free Admission to Museums

??? 首段
版本1：In recent years, an increasing number of museums become free to the public. （或：It can be noticed that ...）There are several aims for this phenomenon, but the following may be the most critical. Free admission enables people, especially students, to have more opportunities to visit museums, where they can acquire knowledge of history, arts, customs and so forth.

版本2: According to a recent survey by China Daily, about 84.3% of museums become free to the public. By doing so, museums attract millions of people to visit every day. In addition, the visitors, especially students, broaden their horizons and enlarge their scope of knowledge.

???? 中間段:

There are, however, several negative effects which we can not turn a blind eye to. Firstly, owing to free admission, a large number of visitors will visit museums. Consequently, the museum may become too crowded. Even worse, free admission may result in some financial problems. For instance, museum workers can hardly get enough salary. Last but not least, the preservation of cultural heritage may be impaired.

???? 尾段：

版本1：(課堂講過的) Personally, I am convinced that free admission to museum is a two-edged sword, which presents us both advantages and troubles. The best policy, as I see it, is to maximize the benefits and minimize the negative influences.

版本2：From my point of view, it is high time that we took measures to eliminate the negative impacts. Firstly, regulations should be worked out to limit the number of visitors to museum every day. Secondly, it is advisable for government to offer financial assistance to museums. Only in this way can museums provide service to public in a better way.
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