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話題:

Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Nozzle
A nozzle is an opening allowing liquid to flow out. What does the nozzle looke like? Where is it found? What is its purpose?
This week's topic: They tightened the nozzle... (90-110 words)

Suggestions:
1) installing a nozzle on a garden hose
2) changing the nozzle size when spray-painting a wall
3) ensuring the nozzle is unclogged
4) different designs of a nozzle
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.

范例1:

No doubt the sound was to indicate someone swiping a key card to get access to the area. For that split second Doug panicked, he tilted the crystal bottle, and to his surprise, the cap popped off. It turned out the bottle was a lot fuller than he thought. In fact, the bottle was pretty much full when he reached it, Doug figured. Unlike the standard size bottle, this smaller limited edition bottle did not have a spraying nozzle, which means there was nothing stopping the liquid inside from flowing out once the cap was off.

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