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話題:

Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Ring
Ring can be the sound made by bells, or something circular in shape. What does the ring look like? What is its function?
This week's topic: They purchased a ring... (90-110 words)

Suggestions:
1) making a ring out of creative material
2) hearing the doorbell ring
3) air bubbles forming a ring
4) the rining of the phone was cut off
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.

范例1:

As the sales clerk was ringing up the purchase, Sean took out a gift box from his pocket. As soon as the cover of the box was opened, the strawberry crystal sparkled under the light. Perhaps the lighting in a jewelery store was specially designed to maximize light reflection, the crystal shone ever more brilliantly. The housemate standing next to Sean exclaimed about the beauty of the piece, asking Sean when he made the purchase of the crystal. “I got it as a gift,” Sean replied as he showed a bright smile.

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