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話題:

Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Choke
To choke means breathing is obstructed. Who is choking? What is it caused by? Who, if anyone, comes to the rescue?
This week's topic: They almost choked... (90-110 words)

Suggestions:
1) someone choking on a piece of fish bone
2) a child choking on a small toy
3) a choking attacking in mixed martial arts
4) a first-aid instructor in class teaching the j-maneuver to help choking victims
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.

范例1:

The model took a glance at the food table before heading towards the VIP area with the staff member. The corporate executives introduced Al to some acquaintances, senior officials of other companies. While entertaining these people, Al was rather bored. He thought of the masked figure choking on his drink and laughed to himself. The officials did not stay for long, and after they left, Al went back downstairs. This time though, he picked up a mask on the way. By the time he exited the VIP area, he donned a mask, just like the crowd of guests surrounding him.

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