英文天天寫:Rail
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話題:
Writing: imagine a scenario or express your opinion
Rail
Rails mark the boundaries of areas. What is the rail used for? Who put it there? What is the rail made of? Where is the rail installed?
This week's topic: They installed the rail... (90-110 words)
Suggestions:
1) the rail separating the boundaries of the racetrack
2) rail installed on the side of the swimming pool
3) handrails along the staircase
4) the rail alongside the ice rink
5) Instead of writing a scenario, feel free to comment on the story below.
范例1:
Wolfe looked up and saw the club manager standing in the balcony on the second floor, with his hands on the rail while looking down at the dance floor. The VIP section, thought Wolfe. It would be best if he stayed there for most of the night... One down, one to go. Wolfe turned away just before the club manager looked down to where he was. Wandering around the venue, Wolfe came to the conclusion that the model had not yet arrived. Since the model was the face of the cologne, Wolfe figured that there would be a lot more commotion with the model's presence.
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