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話題：

If you've ever been disturbed by the noise of line dance, please share with us your experience.
Present your opinions towards these students' action and give some advice on this kind of dispute.?
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范例1：

In fact, my?grandma and even my dear mother?have ever been the members of the line dance team?in?the community. They?set out to go dancing on 7 o'clock and came back?by 9 o'clock every evening. In their words, line dance is?an interesting exercise which could?improve their health condition. But as for me,?they were just following the crowd, never?considering its practical?effect. I am not denying the positive functions of the line dance. The point?I want to emphasize here?is that not all people dance for good health and some just do it for fun.?The noise?problem caused by the line dance is not very serious in my city.?In my opinion, the most fundamental reason for these disputes is that the?public entertainment facilities?the government invests to construct?cannot meet the increasing physical fitness needs of middle-aged and elderly people.?This can not be blamed entirely on some people's uncivilized behaviours or impolite words. Therefore,?to decrease such disputes, the government should increase its investment in the construction of public entertainment facilities, and provide those dancers with?an appropriate place. Meanwhile, the people themselves should also improve their own civilization quality and self-consciousness. Just as the saying goes, "Do not do to others what you would not have others do to you", and if those dancers can place themselves as one of?those victims, they'll understand their annoyance. Only when both the people and the government take positive?measures?towards the line dance can the life be more beautiful and harmonious.
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范例2：

That kind of dancing is not very popular inmy place. Usually some old people form as a small group and use a mini radio todance. The noise is not very loud and would not disturb the others. When I walkpass their place, I often like to see how they dance and how they enjoythemselves.

I think it is the matter of respect.Everyone has the rights to enjoy their life. We can do exercises, play games orsing songs only if the activities would not violate the rights of the others.Keeping the noise to an acceptable volume is a basic rule to hold on anyactivities. I could not find any excuses for them. So I hope all the dancerscan pay respect to the others.?


范例3：
I?have?no?prejudice?against?the?old?people,?and?I?think?the?line?dance?is?a?good?way?for?them?to?entertain?and?socialize.?But?in?China,?good?deeds?sometimes?can?become?a?nuisance.?This?is?the?case.?A?bunch?grandmas?and?grandpas?gather?in?the?little?plaza?or?some?open?space?in?your?neighborhood?to?dance,?they?really?enjoy?it.?However,?they?really?need?to?use?the?loudspeaker?and?have?fun?until?night.?The?residents?around?have?their?own?life?and?they?do?not?appreciate?the?performance?of?the?line?dance.?Thus?the?interest?of?conflict?appears?and?when?the?residents?cannot?stand?the?noise?and?the?bizarre?activities,?quarrels?emerge.?How?should?we?solve?this?problem,?actually,?it’s?quite?easy.?When?we?do?something?to?entertain?ourselves,?we?should?consider?the?feeling?of?people?around.?In?the?case,?the?line?dancers?they?should?turn?down?their?music,?when?night?falls,?they?definitely?should?pack?themselves?and?go?back?home,?leaving?the?neighborhood?quiet?and?peaceful.?Then?,every?one?would?have?a?nice?dream,?huh???

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