丁曉鐘：全國(guó)著名四六級(jí)輔導(dǎo)專(zhuān)家，恩波特聘優(yōu)秀核心教師，六級(jí)輔導(dǎo)實(shí)力派領(lǐng)軍人物，“閱讀超精讀”和“詞匯超鏈接”學(xué)習(xí)理念的創(chuàng)始人。全國(guó)唯一在同一城市招生超過(guò)兩千人的六級(jí)老師，被業(yè)界人士驚呼為“奇跡”、“不可能完成的任務(wù)”。其編著的多本六級(jí)輔導(dǎo)書(shū)均進(jìn)入暢銷(xiāo)書(shū)行列。親自擔(dān)任恩波網(wǎng)站的主力輔導(dǎo)老師,? 使不能參加丁老師輔導(dǎo)班的同學(xué)同樣能接受丁老師的指導(dǎo)。


作文范文（一）
四六級(jí)考試在即，特修改了一份同學(xué)的作文，括號(hào)內(nèi)為修改稿，請(qǐng)同學(xué)們體會(huì)詞匯和句型用法，并與原文對(duì)照，仔細(xì)琢磨。謝謝！祝各位好運(yùn)！

The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller by abc_girl
Nowadays, science and technology have rapid improvement.
( Nowadays, science and technology are developing at an incredible speed. )

That dominates our daily lives, which makes us feel that the world is getting smaller and smaller.
(Fruits of their development began to dominate our daily lives, giving us a feeling that the world is becoming ever-smaller.)

Currently, the forms of communication are altering day and night as corresponding techniques improving. There are a variety of ways to communicate coming out behind people’s growing requisition.
（As technology is fast advancing, a variety of communications tools have sprung up to meet people’s growing needs.)

Mobile telephone, Internet and visual telephone, which belong to high technical instrument, are frequently and widely combined with our lives.
(Mobile phone, Internet and visual telephone—sophisticated communications devices—are being integrated into our lives.)

For instance, we are able to connect with Internet, and then function the concerned software, such as ICQ and MSN, to contact others we request to get in touch with.
(For instance, we are able to surf the net and chat online. The information we try to find and the people we try to get in touch with seem to be only clicks away.)

Visual telephone is a new style of updated phone, which can transmit voice signal and visual signal simultaneously.
Synchronously, the traffic vehicle are also coming to be more and more popular.
(In the meantime, our means of transportation have undergone tremendous changes as well and autos have rolled into millions of households. )

Plane, high speed train and high speed shuttle bus are diffused for us.
(Plane, high speed train and high speed shuttle bus are becoming increasingly popular.)

We spend half of original time, even less than that, from one place to another via modernized traffic implement and system.
(It is now taking us much shorter time than before to go from one place to another via modernized traffic systems. )

Above phenomena reveal that the world is getting smaller and smaller, and universal people are getting closer and closer attribute to the increasingly sophisticated science and technology.
(The above phenomena reveal that the world is getting smaller and smaller, and people worldwide are getting closer and closer thanks to the fast-developing science and technology.)

?