2014年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)：China（滬江網(wǎng)校版）
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Guilin – A Beautiful City in China
In China, there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this, I will recommend Guilin as the first destination of my foreign friend's trip to China.
Overlooking the Li Jiang River, Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees of the location. The trees line the streets of the town with yellow flowers blossoming every September, filling the air with sweet scent.
Guilin is a place of breath-taking scenery. From ancient times, Guilin has been noted for its elegant landscape. It features beautiful mountains, clear rivers, grotesque rocks and mystic crags, which is a feast for the eyes. Sitting on a bamboo raft drifting down the river, visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water. They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting.
I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the unparalleled beauty of Guilin.
【點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本次四級(jí)作文一反以往的圖片題形式，改為情境式話(huà)題作文，可能讓準(zhǔn)備好圖片題寫(xiě)作的同學(xué)有點(diǎn)措手不及。不過(guò)話(huà)題貼近生活，要求介紹中國(guó)某個(gè)好玩的地方，即一篇介紹性的短文，難度不大，只要避免語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤即可保證得分。想要博出彩拿高分，可以在詞匯的豐富性上下功夫，避免同樣的詞多次出現(xiàn)。?
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