【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思寫作】教育類真題7分范文二(1/2)
來源:滬江聽寫酷
2014-04-10 17:28
教育類真題
【Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more schoolwork. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 】
跟第一期節(jié)目是同一個話題哦。文章有些長分成兩部分啦。
書中的原文是同學回憶的文章,有一些語法錯誤。
而音頻中的文章是Pat老師修改過后的,修正錯誤的同時運用了更多的同義替換和華麗句式,所以根據(jù)修改版的提供原文哦。
童鞋們聽寫的時候要注意連讀哈。
另:如果花線錯誤歡迎留言告訴小編喲~
學習愉快喵。O(∩_∩)O~
The issue of whether children are given too much free time, in my view, it's not about the amount of free time they have, but about whether this time can be spent in socially productive activities.
Clearly, giving students an excessive amount of spare time after school may cause a series of problems. Young students are at the best stage in their lives to acquire knowledge and skills, if this precious period is occupied with idle activities, they will have to do much more to compete with their peers when they become adults.
What can be more disturbing is the possible increase in children's miss behaviour and even offenses after school. Some teenagers may linger on the streets instead of staying with their parents or guardians, which makes it very likely for them to be involved in criminal acts.
Not only does school work can include writing essays and research papers, it may also offer a variety of social activities. Such as group discussions or preparation for team presentations, which hones children's cooperative skills. So it seems children should indeed spend more time on their schoolwork.
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