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背景介紹:

你們的宿舍里有木有體重器?你是否有一群可愛的室友們,她們樂此不疲的稱體重,然后為僅僅0.1kg的變化而高興的尖叫或桑心的抱怨?你又是否見過有身高165+的女生看著體重器上90+的數(shù)字叫著最近又胖了?胖子沒有未來,在這個(gè)人人都是外貌協(xié)會(huì)的社會(huì)中根深蒂固直入人心。多少明明身體健康體重正常的女生在嚴(yán)重偏瘦的排骨們的打擊下失去自信奮不顧身節(jié)食減肥。

白天不懂夜的黑,瘦子不懂胖子的悲,但是胖子們并非沒有未來。

我們要主宰自己的人生,而不是被體重束縛在沒有自信的框架中!

Is there a weighing machine in your dormitory? Do you have some lovely roommates who yells happily or complains sadly just for a little change of even 0.1kg? In addition, do you have ever seen a girl who was more than 165cm complaining “I have got fatter!” with a 45kg’s weight? The fat have no future, so many people are convinced such an opinion.

The fat also have future.

We should dominate our life ourselves instead being controlled by the weight!

話題:

The fat have no future? What do think of it?

范例1:

The fat have no future? I’ll say “NO”!

It is said that losing weight is the lifetime career of girls. A slim figure is the dream of almost all the girls but god’s favor does not come to everybody, there are always someone not that fortunate. The slim are always popular and draw people’s attention everywhere.On the contrary, the fat whom the god did not smile on lose their confidence and feel inferior. As a result, the dieting boom appears. However, they all ignore a common point that it is the confidence dominating their future instead of the weight! Besides, if they kept harming their health,they would pay a high price .

To conclude, a slim figure is important, a beautiful look is also important, but the most important one is our health.People who own health and a confident smile will get a splendid future!

范例2:

The definition of beauty changes throughout the ages across all cultures. If a person is considered beautiful, it usually means that the person is in good health. Nowadays, it seems the most prevailing definition of beauty is to have low body fat. It is true that a person having low body fat is less likely to have long-term illness such as diabetics and hypertension. To achieve this standard of beauty, however, instead becoming healthier through moderate diet and exercises, it has shifted to looking skinny by all means. It seems the consequences are of no importance, as long as one looks skinny today. This approach is extremely dangerous.

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