2012年6月英語四級(jí)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)(上海新東方版)
過度包裝,類似題目在多種類型的考試或者考試預(yù)測(cè)中出現(xiàn)過。做為一種語言考試,考生不用在意作文題目,因?yàn)檎f什么不重要,只要內(nèi)容相關(guān)就可以了,重要的是對(duì)語言的把握。不是考what to say,而是考how to say。
首先,語言變化性。這個(gè)題目中出現(xiàn)頻率最高的詞,最好能用近義表達(dá)替代。如overly, redundant, wrap, container等。語言的變化性,在國(guó)內(nèi)外考試中都是一個(gè)重要的評(píng)分項(xiàng)目。其次,避免錯(cuò)誤。語言性的錯(cuò)誤是難以讓考官容忍的。四六級(jí)的通過,雖然不能證明您英語有多好,但能證明你英語不算差。所以錯(cuò)誤的多少直接影響考生是否通過。
下面這個(gè)文章不能算是好文章,偶爾還有些不妥,但能是一篇較成功的應(yīng)試文章,這個(gè)文章的句子和思維結(jié)構(gòu)都可以在今天下午的六級(jí)考試中再次成功套用。模板,難以讓您獲得高分,但合格和中等是多半可行的。牢記,這只是一個(gè)語言測(cè)試。
把握好語言基礎(chǔ),掌握好應(yīng)試技巧。
Today, people in growing numbers are beginning to realize the seriousness of prevailing using excessive packing. This is a matter of concerns in the commercial society. Certainly, there is a general discussion among people as to the view of redundant wrapping.
A number of reasons are responsible for this. To begin with, an increasing number of persons like the apparent beauty, and it may attract potential clients. In addition, a good-looking container is viewed as a high quality sometimes. What’s more, it is a waste of resources, but it is possible to gain more benefits than before. Besides, the community tends to accept this, which means more and more people are likely to use it. The above may be the cause for this issue.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that over-pack plays an important role in commercial sales. It is high time that effective actions should be taken to prevent this problem, though redundant wrapping is concerned as an art somehow.