寫好考博作文的幾點(diǎn)看法
???? 本人也曾是考研、考博大軍中的一員,深知作文的好壞直接影響總分,怎樣才能得到好的分?jǐn)?shù)呢?主要有以下幾點(diǎn)體會:一是要背一些句型,各種長短句的搭配運(yùn)用能有效提高作文的檔次,當(dāng)然分值也就提高了;二是要記一些不同類型作文的框架,針對不同的題材,通過修飾、潤色,基本就差不多了;三是要學(xué)會舉例子,在寫到山窮水盡時,不妨來個例子,盡可在不偏離主題的情況下自由發(fā)揮,要求的字?jǐn)?shù)也就上去了。這僅僅是我自己感覺寫作中較重要的三點(diǎn),不能以偏概全,其他還有許多要注意的問題,由于本文篇幅所限,不再贅述,這也只是應(yīng)試的小體會,要真正提高寫作能力,諸君要多練?、多體會才是。仿照下面幾篇文章,大家改寫試試,說不定會有所幫助。
?????? 1.Directions:
?????? Women make a great contribution to the progress of modern society. But there are still some people who don’t agree with it.
?? There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper based on the following outline.
1.????? Role of women in modern society
2.????? Prejudices and discrimination against women
3.????? My comment
You should write about 200 words within 40 minutes.
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????? Women play an important part in modern society.? Now many women are going into professions, such as medicine, law and engineering. They comprise a large part of the workers in offices and factories.? Many jobs they are engaged in are in line with their special capabilities of their sex.? In addition, some of are working up to important positions which used to be held mainly by men. There are even some businesses which are run completely by women. It is obvious that women are making an outstanding contribution to the progress of modern society.
????? There are, however, still some people who assert that men are superior to women in many ways. In the first place, many jobs men do can hardly be done by women, who are physically not strong enough.? They believe that women are the weaker sex – both physically and emotionally. Thus, women are naturally suited, much more so than men, to the performance of domestic duties. According to them, a woman’s place is within the protective environment of the home. Secondly, most of the world-famous scientists and statesmen are found to be males. Finally, the whole society seems to have always been dominated by men only. In their opinion, men should enjoy more rights than do women.
?????? Personally, I’m firmly standing on the side of those women right defenders. Since both men and women are equally important in human activities, they should be on an equal footing. (242 words)
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??????? 2.Directions: In this part, you are to write an essay of about 200 words within 40 minutes. Study the following table care fully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table.? You should quote as few figures as possible.
?? Outline:? 1. Changes in people’s daily expanses in the past five years
?????? ?????2. Possible reasons for the changes
??????????? 3. My own conclusion
???? Year Item |
1997 |
1998 |
1999 |
2000 |
2001 |
Food |
65% |
60% |
48% |
42% |
35% |
Clothing |
5% |
7% |
10% |
13% |
15% |
Recreation |
3% |
5% |
7% |
8% |
13% |
Others |
24% |
26% |
33% |
36% |
38% |
Total |
100% |
100% |
100% |
100% |
100% |
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???? In the past five years, there have been great changes in people’s daily expenses in XX city. According to the figures given in the table, the amount of money spent on food decreased gradually, accounting for 35 per cent in 2001. However, there was a rapid increase in clothing expenses, which made up 15% in 2001. ?In addition, the table shows an upward tendency in recreation expenses. The same was the case with other expenses.
???? What caused these remarkable changes? In my opinion, there are at least three good reasons. To begin with, with the rapid development of agriculture in China, the output of grain, fruit, vegetables and milk has sharply increased, which contributes to the decline in their prices. Secondly, the family incomes of people both in the city and in the country have greatly risen so that people now can afford expensive clothing and some of them even want to dress in the latest fashion. Finally, as the living conditions improve, the demand for a variety of recreations is growing steadily, too.
????? In short, with the incomes continuing to rise, people will no longer resign themselves to living a dull, monotonous life. They are eager to make their life interesting and exciting. Therefore, I am sure that people will spend more money on clothing and recreations. (219 words)
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??????? 3.Directions: Migrant workers (外地民工) have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. In this part, you are to write within 40 minutes a composition of 200 words about “The Role of Migrant Workers”. You can agree and/or disagree, completely or partially to above statement. But no matter which position you take, you should supporting reasons.
???? As is known to all, migrant workers have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. They are an indispensable part of our work force. Most of them work on construction sites. There is no doubt that without migrant workers many of construction projects would have to be held up for lack of manpower. In addition, a large number of migrant workers are a beneficial factor, which enhances the consumption of food and daily items. This in turn helps to develop food industry and service trades in cites. All these are positive aspects of migrant workers in cities.
???? However, as a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides”. The same is the case with migrant workers. Firstly, most of them are not well educated and professionally trained. Some of them have had very little schooling. As you know. Illiterate people, who are usually ignorant of the law, tend to make trouble, thus endangering social order. Secondly, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money. Being illiterate or unskilled, some of them would stop at nothing to get what they are ambitious for. Therefore, they are a potential threat to the peace and stability of society.
???? In my opinion, in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one-sided to affirm everything or to negate everything. We should appreciate the great contribution made by them, and at the same time pay enough attention to the problems caused by them. (244 words)
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