雅思聽力:報告修改建議 (2/4)
來源:滬江聽寫酷
2011-12-23 16:30
本文選自雅思聽力Section 3,難度一般
Summary:學生在大學學習過程中,經常要做一些實地考察研究。在此之前,學生們必須提前做方案,在和同學們討論之后提交給老師。老師修改之后才能開始實際的考察。本節(jié)講的是一個學生在與老師討論他們小組的地理實地考察方案,老師對其提出一些修改建議。
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Navajo Tribal Park
Wild West
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So cut them down a bit, can you?
Really?
Yes. And don't forget simple formatting like numbering.
Didn't I use page numbers?
I didn't mean that. Look, you've remembered to include headers and footers, which is good, but listing ideas clearly is important. Number them or use bullet points, which is even clearer. Then you'll focus the reader on your main points. I thought your suggestion to go to the Navajo Tribal Park was a very good idea.
I've always wanted to go there. My father was a great fan of cowboy films and the Wild West so I was subjected to seeing all the epics, many of which where shot there. As a consequence, it feels very familiar to me and it's awesome both geographically and visually, so it's somewhere I've always wanted to visit. The subsequent research I did and the online photographs made me even keener.