I'm going to the sun for my holiday. I will go there by spaceship. I will pilot a big blue spaceship to the sun. The sun is very hot. So I put on the super shirt.
我要去太陽(yáng)上度假。我要乘宇宙飛船去那里。我要駕駛一架藍(lán)色的大宇宙飛船到太陽(yáng)上。太陽(yáng)很熱。所以我要穿上超級(jí)襯衣。

In the morning, I will have some sun burger for my breakfast. At eight o'clock, I will play with my friends there. They are super dog and super girl. Super dog is white and black. Super girl is very clever. Super girl and super dog like to play with me. So I play with them for forty minutes.
早晨，我要吃一些太陽(yáng)漢堡當(dāng)早餐。八點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，我要跟我的朋友在那里玩耍。他們是超級(jí)狗狗和超級(jí)女生。超級(jí)狗狗是黑白色的。超級(jí)女生很聰明。超級(jí)女生和超級(jí)狗狗都喜歡跟我一起玩。所以我跟他們玩了四十分鐘。

Then I do my homework in my little red room at a small blue table. After my homework, I will have my lunch. I will eat sun salad. I will have red juice, red fish and red rice.I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies. All the things are red.
之后我在紅色的房間的一張藍(lán)色的小桌子上做作業(yè)。做完作業(yè)后，我會(huì)吃午飯。我要吃太陽(yáng)沙拉。我要喝紅色的果汁，吃紅色的魚(yú)和紅色的米飯。我要給太陽(yáng)寶寶做一些紅色的小熊玩具。所有的東西都是紅色的。

Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot. So I will walk to the spaceship. I'll pilot the spaceship to the earth.
因?yàn)樘?yáng)太熱，所以我需要好多的水。所以我回到了宇宙飛船。我要駕駛它飛回地球。

This is a good holiday on the sun.
這是我在太陽(yáng)上的一個(gè)愉快的假期。

小作者按照時(shí)間順序講述了自己在太陽(yáng)上度過(guò)的愉快的一天，向大家展示了自己在太陽(yáng)上度過(guò)的一個(gè)美好而神奇的假期。