你的家長(zhǎng)或老師可能經(jīng)常和你談學(xué)習(xí)問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你敘述一次你的家長(zhǎng)或老師對(duì)你談學(xué)習(xí)的情景、內(nèi)容以及你的感想。

要求：
1) 不使用真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。
2) 內(nèi)容完整，書寫整齊。詞數(shù)80-100。

范文：
When I was in Grade 7, my English was very? poor. I even couldn't understand what my English teacher said in class. I felt so upset that I wanted to give up English. One day, Mrs. Zhang, my English teacher asked me to go to her office and had a long talk with me. She encouraged me to study English well and gave me some good advice. This helped me a? lot. I became confident from then on and made much progress. I believe my English will be much better in the future.

評(píng)分細(xì)則:

1. 本大題共15分,? 按4個(gè)檔次給分。評(píng)分時(shí)先根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確程度進(jìn)檔, 然后根據(jù)細(xì)節(jié)確定分?jǐn)?shù)。

2. 按照談話的情景（4分）、內(nèi)容（5分）和感想（5分）三個(gè)要點(diǎn)賦分。內(nèi)容部分可用直接引語(yǔ)或間接引語(yǔ)表述。

3. 書寫工整1分。詞數(shù)不夠扣3至5分。 使用真實(shí)信息的扣2分。???? ?
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評(píng)分檔次:

第一檔: (13-15分) 能涵蓋所有要點(diǎn), 行文連貫, 語(yǔ)言流暢, 無(wú)語(yǔ)法和習(xí)慣用法錯(cuò)誤。

第二檔: (9-12分) 能涵蓋所有要點(diǎn), 行文基本連貫, 語(yǔ)言比較流暢, 但有少量語(yǔ)法和習(xí)慣用法錯(cuò)誤。

第三檔:(5-8分)? 能涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn), 但行文不夠連貫, 并有少量語(yǔ)法和習(xí)慣表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤。

第四檔:(0-4分)? 只表達(dá)了一、兩個(gè)要點(diǎn), 語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤比較多, 僅有個(gè)別句子可讀。
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