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作文模板一

第一部分：

?①現(xiàn)象導(dǎo)入，引出話題。

Recently, whether one should seek after perfectionism（套主題）in study, work and life stimulates wider discussion.

②材料概述。

As indicated in the two excerpts, Judith Carlisle(套材料中的人，但是點(diǎn)到即可，不要復(fù)述身份等，太啰嗦了。) contends that perfectionism is likely to destroy students’ self-esteem and negatively affect their performance in the long run. However, Paul O’Neil, has considered perfectionism as an effective strategy to ensure workers’ safety.?

③提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

I am firmly convinced that perfection should be the stepping stone rather than the stumbling one as to the development of individuals or enterprises. (82字) 站：正

第二部分：

①第一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)（主題句+論據(jù)）：

For those individuals with high aims, it is understandable that they would expect that everything should be done with perfection. Firstly....Secondly....(說(shuō)理論證)

②第二個(gè)分論點(diǎn)（主題句+論據(jù)）：

For enterprises, too improving the process to the point of perfection is always of great significance because doing so not only boosts efficiency but also minimizes unnecessary incidents. For example...（舉例論證）

注：材料中其實(shí)有提到兩個(gè)不同的角度，對(duì)個(gè)人和對(duì)企業(yè)。雖然我們不能抄材料，但是可以借鑒這樣的思路。如果文章中沒(méi)有兩個(gè)主體，你也可以直接用For one thing... For another...這樣成對(duì)的銜接詞哦。

第三部分：

總結(jié)（更全面的角度去分析）

All in all, perfectionism is an attitude that motivates us to try our best to achieve our goals. Meanwhile, we should bear in mind that the pursuit of perfection allows for mistakes and something imperfect, and that an overemphasis on perfection is more an obstacle than a motivator.?

注：提升觀點(diǎn)。追求完美很好，同時(shí)也應(yīng)該允許出差錯(cuò)。

作文模板二

第一部分：

?①現(xiàn)象導(dǎo)入，引出話題。

Recently, the pursuit of perfection（套主題）has sparked a heated discussion on its merits and drawbacks.?

②材料概述。

As indicated in the two excerpts, Judith Carlisle(套材料中的人) contends that perfectionism is likely to destroy students’ self-esteem and negatively affect their performance in the long run. However, Paul O’Neil, has considered perfectionism as an effective strategy to ensure workers’ safety.?

③提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

Taking all the factors into consideration, I’m inclined to agree that the advantages of perfection outweigh its disadvantages. 站：利大于弊

第二部分：

①過(guò)渡句（可刪）

Several factors can account for this phenomenon.

②第一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)（主題句+論據(jù)）：

On the one hand, the benefits of pursuing perfection could be easily seen. Firstly....Secondly....(說(shuō)理論證)

③第二個(gè)分論點(diǎn)（主題句+論據(jù)）：

On the other hand, too much emphasis on perfection might impose more adverse effects upon one’s work and life than expected. For example...（舉例論證）

（備用句型：Despite the benefits of perfection, focusing too much on it would give rise to problems. ）

第三部分：

總結(jié)（綜合分析）

From what have been discussed above, we can draw a conclusion that it might be a wise policy to adopt perfectionism as a long-term vision and life strategy on the one hand, and to accept and forgive one’s own failures in specific tasks on the other. And most significantly, doing one’s best is actually good enough.

(當(dāng)結(jié)尾匆忙時(shí)，不妨把a(bǔ)ll in all, 換成長(zhǎng)一些的總結(jié)表達(dá)，可以湊湊字?jǐn)?shù)，平衡整個(gè)的結(jié)構(gòu)哦。)

總結(jié)一下：

①記得概述材料，但不要抄原文。

②論述，可正可反，能自圓其說(shuō)就好。

③學(xué)會(huì)專四寫作思路，巧用模板，切莫考前硬背。

④給你的作文來(lái)點(diǎn)高級(jí)感：漂亮的開(kāi)頭，豐富的詞句，恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯?，自然的收尾?/p>