雅思寫作指導(dǎo):怎樣將句子由簡單變復(fù)雜
很多人在寫英語作文的時(shí)候經(jīng)常是簡單句子的堆砌,不懂得如何擴(kuò)寫,也不懂如何潤色,這樣的文章通篇感受就是沒什么亮點(diǎn),難點(diǎn)加分點(diǎn)也是寥寥無幾。如果在雅思作文當(dāng)中還是這樣,就可能和高分失之交臂。下面就告訴大家在雅思寫作中如何將句子由簡單變復(fù)雜。
方法1:如果兩個(gè)簡單句沒有因果關(guān)系,基本上是兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的事情,往往可以簡單地用and相連。
舉例:Children are not sensitive to prices and parents prefer to satisfy their needs.
方法2:如果兩個(gè)簡單句有一定的因果關(guān)系,往往可以用狀語從句相連。
一般來說,if 和when引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句(也有一定因果關(guān)系,只是不那么強(qiáng))
舉例:If advertising campaigns directed at children are regulated, children will not pester their parents to buy many goods for them.
Since, as, because, so等引導(dǎo)原因或者結(jié)果狀語從句,表示比較強(qiáng)的因果關(guān)系
舉例:some children like fast food since they are overwhelmed by fast food advertisements every day.
方法3:如果狀語從句怕重復(fù),可以用and(或者;)+連接詞的方式
有很多連接詞because of this, as a result of this, consequently, as a consequence 等,都是表示因果關(guān)系。
舉例:some children are addicted to violent video games, and because of this, they can show aggression and bully their peers at school.
方法4:如果第一個(gè)單句的最后一個(gè)單詞和第二個(gè)單句的第一個(gè)單詞重復(fù),可以用定語從句連接。
舉例:Children are increasingly temperamental due to their addiction to violent electronic games. These games are normally promoted by advertising firms.
可以改成:Children are increasingly temperamental due to their addiction to violent electronic games, which are normally promoted by advertising firms.
方法5:如果第二個(gè)單句是第一個(gè)單句的結(jié)果,有可能使用非限制性定語從句
舉例:Advertisements have given a lot of information about products. This enables parents to make well-informed buying decisions.
可以改成:Advertisements have given a lot of information about products, which can help parents to make well-informed buying decisions.
要多寫單句,單句寫好了,復(fù)雜句也會寫。雅思考官不好蒙騙。你一個(gè)復(fù)雜句如果寫的不對,考官馬上可以看出來,分?jǐn)?shù)馬上就會降低。因此,踏實(shí)寫好簡單句,分?jǐn)?shù)更加容易提高。只有當(dāng)你熟悉單句后,才可以將句子連接起來。
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