下面看一個(gè)劍橋閱讀中的例子：

Toughened glass is found everywhere, from cars and bus shelters to the windows, walls and roofs of thousands of buildings around the world.

二、觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)經(jīng)

1、Most people think of the cultures represented in the collection in terms of the absence of advance d technology. In fact, traditional practices draw on a continuing wealth of technological constraints are often overcome by personal skills that would be regarded as exceptional in the west.

2、Although there has been some decrease in absence rates, no single strategy or combination of strategies has had a significant impact on absenteeism per se.

3、Clearly the world cannot revert to the horse-drawn wagon.

由以上幾個(gè)例子我們可以看出，老外寫文章是不會(huì)赤裸裸的直接用“I”來表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的，也不一定非要借助 in one’s opinion, from my point of view等被大家用濫的詞匯，如果你想在寫作考試成績(jī)低迷的今天異軍突起，就要仔細(xì)琢磨一下老外的表達(dá)習(xí)慣嘍！

觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)經(jīng)之我見：

1）背景句/段+in fact +自己的觀點(diǎn)

可以用非常平易近人的in effect, actually代替in fact

2）although +背景句+自己的觀點(diǎn)

可以用despite, in spite of, notwithstanding 等常用詞匯代替although

3) 背景句（段）+ clearly+自己的觀點(diǎn)

可以用obviously, apparently等再簡(jiǎn)單不過的詞代替clearly

三、總結(jié)陳述經(jīng)

看慣了in conclusion，all in all的考官需要我們做一下改變了。提醒您，其實(shí)只要你仔細(xì)從閱讀中找規(guī)律，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，最常用的表達(dá)總結(jié)陳述的詞竟然是thus，therefore這樣的單詞而非短語！要么就是簡(jiǎn)單的 “it is our belief that…”

以上只是筆者的一點(diǎn)心得。無論怎樣，專家們希望各位烤鴨能夠針對(duì)中國(guó)學(xué)生寫作中的不良習(xí)慣，如喜歡用大詞，喜歡套用模板，喜歡一味的用動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)組織句子等等，以雅思閱讀材料作為藍(lán)本，從小詞入手，再過渡到句子、段落、篇章，以及各種個(gè)性化的表達(dá)方式，多觀察多模仿。比如，可以通過閱讀中題目與原文中同義詞的代換來理解“遣詞造句”之我見；從議論的句子或段落里理解“觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)之我見”和“總結(jié)陳述經(jīng)”。

總之，一定會(huì)讓你的文章從黑白色變成彩色，從平面變成立體，給人以自然清新的印象，從而走出寫作成績(jī)低迷的現(xiàn)狀。