滬江英語綠寶書之2010年12月大學(xué)英語六級(jí)考試
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Part Ⅰ
Writing

My View on University Ranking

In recent years, all kinds of University Ranking Lists can be found on some educational websites, or newspapers. The ranking standards also vary. These lists have great influence on students. They are even becoming the only scale to evaluate the colleges and universities.

People hold different views toward this phenomenon. Some believe that these lists help the students a lot, especially for those who will choose their university. While some other protest vigorously. In their points, the list is really ridiculous and harmful. In my view, the university ranking may have its own reference values, but its disadvantages overweigh its values.

For those university-students-to-be, they are supposed to choose the school according to his or her own situation, but not the so-called Ranking List. What’s more, how about the university students? How do they feel about themselves when they see the ranking? The list may become some intangible shackles for them if their own school ranks poorly.

In a nutshell, there is no easy method to rank these universities, but the Ranking, only helps students ignore the essentials, namely, their ninety-nine percent perspiration.

此次六級(jí)作文的自由度很大,看似給出了提綱,實(shí)際上具體的觀點(diǎn)全靠個(gè)人發(fā)揮。第一段需要點(diǎn)明大學(xué)排名這個(gè)現(xiàn)象,第二段需要鋪陳不同人的觀點(diǎn),第三段要陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)。
大學(xué)排名這個(gè)題目,實(shí)際上涉及到了對(duì)了大學(xué)的理解,對(duì)于大學(xué)排名標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的理解,以及對(duì)于大學(xué)排名的目的的理解。而這件事更加離不開中國(guó)具體的國(guó)情,新中國(guó)50年代人至今受教育的情況,90后擇校的情況,目前大學(xué)的情況,考生發(fā)揮的空間可以縱橫數(shù)十年的教育史,并且可以深入探討教育的本質(zhì)。
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模板一
1.Different people have different views on——
2. Some people perfer,——
3. Others tend to, ——
4.As to me, I agree with / to ——
(1)開門見山直入主體,表明對(duì)某事人們的不同看法。
(2)表明一部分人的看法。
(3)另一部分的看法。
(4)作者的看法

我們這里放出來的這篇文章,語言流暢,觀點(diǎn)清晰,多處表述有閃光點(diǎn)。