【雅思寫作】全面突擊之二:從解題方法上突擊
同樣通過審題,我們可以對正文的結(jié)構(gòu)做如下安排,先寫一段讓步段,承認題干的論點的合理性即“government action can combat this problem”,再舉兩個反例,即兩段反對意見,除了政府政策外,人們對房子的觀念(people’s awareness)以及一些房產(chǎn)公司的舉措對解決這個問題都有決定性的作用(key determinant)。通過上述brainstorming, 我們可以寫出全篇文章的框架:
Introduction: As a growing number of people find their jobs in urban areas, the increasingly severe housing problem becomes the focus of public.
→ 從原因著手,引出話題:城市住房短缺。
Main body 1: It is granted that government action plays a pivotal role in combating housing shortage as a range of policies issued by government have alleviated the thorny problem, such as the construction of satellite towns around the city.
→闡述第一個觀點,即題干給出的觀點,政府政策能有效緩解住房短缺。
Main body 2: However, on no account can we lose sight of the essential part performed by individuals, a portion of whom are suggested to change their concept and attitude towards housing.
→指出人們對房子的觀念和態(tài)度需轉(zhuǎn)換,這對解決問題也有促進作用。
Main body 3: Besides, as key determinant, profit-oriented companies of real estate are advised to adopt effective steps, including building high-rise apartment, to use land economically in urban areas.
→闡述一些房產(chǎn)公司的舉措也能起緩解作用。
Conclusion: Overall, the government, the housing-related companies, and the individuals as well all play a determinant role in resolving the housing shortage.
→ 三方共同作用,才能解決住房短缺的問題。
III. 相似真題
1. Environmental problem is too big for individual countries and individual person to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
2. Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the 20th century and it has the biggest impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
3. Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?