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The growing conflict in education, especially the conflict between teachers and students, has aroused a heated discussion as to the solutions to this phenomenon. Views on the topic vary greatly among people from different walks of life.

There are several things we can do based on the causes for such conflict. First, students usually don’t have a thorough understanding of how challenging and tiresome a teachers’ job could be; therefore, the school authorities could create more chances for students to experience it, say, let students be one-day teachers. Also, it is suggested that regular experience-sharing from experienced teachers and constant communication with students, particularly with those troubled ones, should be required of young novice teachers so that they can put themselves in the students’ shoes. Finally, balancing educational resources will greatly relieve the pressure on teachers and schools because they don’t need to deal with so many students at a time.

From my perspective, it is crucial that the relationship between teachers and students be improved remarkably and immediately. Only in this way can we build a harmonious society.

解析
文體：本次的作文是大家所熟悉的“議論文”，所以在文體上應(yīng)該給了大家一顆定心丸，比今年6月份的應(yīng)用文——廣告——要容易寫很多；

審題：其實(shí)題目中，最重要的一句話是：how to best handle the relationship between teachers and students, 所以大家要好好思考一下這一句話就好了；這句話體現(xiàn)出的主題是“師生關(guān)系”，體現(xiàn)的要求是需要一個(gè)“解決方法”，因?yàn)榇朕o用的是“how”，所以大家在寫的時(shí)候，圍繞“師生關(guān)系”，給出“解決方法”就不會(huì)偏題了；

結(jié)構(gòu)：議論文用三段論是最簡(jiǎn)單也最有效的。正如滬江網(wǎng)校的四六級(jí)課程里，一直給大家灌輸?shù)睦砟罹褪且褒堫^鳳尾，中間結(jié)構(gòu)清晰”。也就是說(shuō)，開頭和結(jié)尾至少要用詞準(zhǔn)確，有吸引力，尤其是開頭部分。因?yàn)殚_頭是給改卷老師形成第一印象的重要位置，所以大家要保證開頭的質(zhì)量；結(jié)尾一段也是如此；而中間部分，有連接詞展現(xiàn)段落的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，這篇文章在結(jié)構(gòu)上就很清晰明了了。所以本文第一段，引入師生關(guān)系的主題，第二段給出自己的解決方法，并說(shuō)明原因，第三段進(jìn)一步給出建議或者以總結(jié)的方式升華主題，思路就很清楚了。