四六級寫作最強模板(上)
1.??? 描圖類模板
描圖怎么描,大家根據(jù)我給的資料,整理出一個個性化的思路大綱應(yīng)付此類題目。
編者按:以下列出了五個模塊:
考試如果你打算寫現(xiàn)象解釋:請用①②③
即第一段:描圖;第二段:現(xiàn)象解釋;第三段:提倡解決
考試如果你打算寫正反觀點:請用①④
即第一段:描圖;第二段:正反觀點;第三段:自己觀點
學霸版:到了考場自由組合,而⑤是例子和數(shù)據(jù),見機在合適的地方插入即可。
首先大家要學會審題,看清楚題干到底要大家干什么!
模塊1:描圖
第一部分:描述圖片
(1)???? As is humorously/vividly/clearly/subtly depicted/described/portrayed/illustrated in the picture/drawing/cartoon, ______________. (句子)
(2)???? The picture/cartoon displays/portrays a very special scene: __________________. (句子)
(3)???? From the picture, a seemingly superficial phenomenon is presented:____________. (句子)
(4)???? This photo captures a critical moment that ___________. (句子).
(5)???? The drawing presents us with a thought-provoking scene: __________________. (句子)
(6)???? In the picture we could see clearly that ______________________. (句子)
(7)???? As we can see from the picture, ________. (句子)
(8)???? As the picture given depicts, ________. (句子)
1.?????? 用這些套句足矣,后面你自由發(fā)揮的句子更加精彩。
2.?????? 表示圖片的說法卡通 cartoon; 素描sketch; 照片photo; 圖片 picture; 手繪drawing。
第二部分:圖片含義
(1)???? What the picture is trying to present is that _____(句).
(2)???? The picture intends to inform us that ______(句).
(3)???? What does the cartoonist want to tell us? Actually, this drawing shows us a social phenomenon that______________(句子).
(4)???? The artist of the cartoon apparently intends to draw our attention to ________(主題單詞).
(5)???? In effect, this cartoon is a miniature of a prevalent phenomenon. _____(句).
(6)???? Conspicuously, this cartoon symbolically characterizes a status quo. _____(句).
(7)???? Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. _____(句).
舉例:
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?Ironically, the cartoon displays a very special scene: a young student is asking for a book named “How to Do Well in School Without Studying”, and the lady at the front desk suggests him to find it in the fiction section. Obviously, the artist of the cartoon intends to draw our attention to a simple truth that there is no shortcut to learning.
★補充學霸版:
第一句:_________(背景句), as is vividly described in the picture.
第二句:具體描述圖片的大致內(nèi)容
第三句:引出出題
背景句可以在下天龍八部的句子中選擇(注意背景句只要寫大范圍即可)
1.????? Technology may exert a great impact on our lives.
2.????? The past several years has witnessed the widespread availability of the Internet.
3.????? Environmental protection plays an important role in everyday life.
4.????? Children’s education has captured numerous attentions from the general public.
5.????? Aging population has recently arisen as one of the essential issues.
舉例:
College education has recently arisen as one of the essential issues, as is vividly described in the cartoon. A young student is asking for a book named “How to Do Well in School Without Studying”, and the lady at the front desk suggests him to find it in the fiction section. Obviously, the artist of the cartoon intends to draw our attention to a simple truth that there is no shortcut to learning.
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模塊2:現(xiàn)象解釋
第一部分:闡述現(xiàn)象的普遍性(選用)
這部分可用可不用,看具體套用是否合適
(1)???? Remarkably, this sort of phenomenon becomes the norm in our society, which can be seen almost everywhere.
(2)???? Nobody fails to notice this fact, as it is now quite prevailing in contemporary society.
(3)???? Strikingly, in contemporary society, this sort of phenomenon is becoming increasingly common and eye-catching.
第二部分:解釋現(xiàn)象
(1)???? There are mainly two factors contributing to this social phenomenon.
(2)???? Why, you may wonder, does this phenomenon arise?
(3)???? The reasons for this social phenomenon are as follows.
(4)???? Two fundamental factors/reasons could account for this social phenomenon.
(5)???? Personally, among all the factors that account for this trend, the following are worth mentioning.
第三部分:原因1
(1)???? To begin with, ______________ might be responsible for this social phenomenon.
(2)???? First and foremost, this problem stems/results from ________, which tends to be inevitable/unavoidable.
(3)???? In the first place, this phenomenon could be attributed to ________, which majority of the population fails to take into consideration.
(4)???? For one thing, this situation could be seen/considered/regarded/deemed as a result/consequence of ________.
(5)???? Perhaps, this primary reason is that ____________________(句子)
第三部分:原因2(句式可以和原因1一樣)
(1)???? Moreover/Furthermore/What’s more, _____________________.
(2)???? In addition, _____________________.
(3)???? Besides, _____________________.
(4)???? For another thing, ____________________.
(5)???? The second reason is that __________________.
原因備選:
經(jīng)濟增長:economic growth; 人口膨脹:population expansion; 教育體制:education system; 家庭教育:family education; 社會影響:social influence; 環(huán)境因素:environmental impact;技術(shù)革新:technological innovation.
建議:最好能在原因后面補充敘述一些展開內(nèi)容,可以套用《陳曲寫作備考三部曲》文章的天龍八部或萬能句。他們可以在這里用。
其中描述時代背景是其中的一種:
舉個例子:
With the reform and opening-up in recent decades in China, people’s living standard has been very much improved.
或者:
With the development of our society, youngsters in mounting numbers are attaching much significance to the living standard.
舉例:
Nevertheless, nowadays people tend to believe there is such a thing as a shortcut to learning. Remarkably, this sort of phenomenon becomes the norm in our society. There are mainly two factors contributing to this social illusion. To begin with, it stems from the educational system. Schools tend to attach less importance to the basic knowledge, but more to the academic scores. Secondly, this situation could be seen as a result of the social influence. Young people are under considerable pressure for a living because the competition is increasingly fierce. Consequently, majority of the students are always dreaming for a short path.
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模塊3:解決倡導
首先學習三種經(jīng)典句型:
1.?????? 倒裝句:Only in this way can we _______________.
2.?????? 強調(diào)句:Obviously, it is __________ that _________.
3.?????? 虛擬語氣:It is high time that we should take concerted steps to _______________.
第一部分:問題解決型總起
(1)???? To ____________, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides.
(2)???? To ____________, in my mind, there are at least two approaches.
(3)???? Urgent measures are needed to _______________.
(4)???? The following ways can be adopted to ____________________.
To后面填上動詞+名詞組合
比如:發(fā)揚/抑制這種社會現(xiàn)象
發(fā)揚:advocate, enhance, strengthen, reinforce, further, advance
抑制:curb, cease, impede, prevent, put an end to, eliminate, rectify
現(xiàn)象:social phenomenon, situation, condition
好(現(xiàn)象):positive, favorable, desirable
壞(現(xiàn)象):negative, unfavorable, undesirable, adverse
比如為了解決這個現(xiàn)象,我們需要各方努力。
To put an end to this unfavorable phenomenon, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides.
比如為了推動這個現(xiàn)象,我們有以下幾個方法。
The following ways can be adopted to advocate this social phenomenon.
解決方案不外乎兩種:第一種是“天下興亡,匹夫有責”,所謂微觀解決法;第二種是政府媒體,所謂宏觀解決法。
第二句:解決方法1(微觀解決)
(1)???? From my perspective, only when all of us join in the efforts at all levels can we expect to ___________ properly.
(2)???? From my perspective, it is particularly important that we should take actions.
(3)???? It seems to me that it is high time that we should take concerted steps.
(4)???? On the micro level, I believe it is every individual’s duty to ____________________.
(5)???? From where I stand, every one of us might as well _____________________.
第三句:解決方法2(宏觀解決)
(1)???? Equally important/Similarly/Likewise, I gradually realize that the authority and mass media need to shoulder this responsibility.
(2)???? In the meantime/Meanwhile/Simultaneously, I personally believe that the authority and mass media need to assume this responsibility.
(3)???? Since my own voice is too weak to be heard, I hope we can call on the public to take this responsibility.
(4)???? Moreover, if government makes relevant policies and measures, the problem can be readily solved(e.g.) in the foreseeable future.
(5)???? Some relevant laws and regulations should be enacted and enforced.
(6)???? On the macro level, the government and mass media should be held accountable.
(7)???? It is urgent and imperative for the mass media to take some measures.
舉例:
The following ways, from my perspective, can be adopted to address the problem. On the macro level, if the department of education can shoulder the responsibility and make relevant measures, the schools will pay more attention to teaching basic knowledge in the future. On the micro level, only by hard work can we form the bedrock of good performance in school.
模塊4:正反論述
第一句:引出爭議
(1)???? There is much controversy over __________.
(2)???? ________ has given rise to a heated discussion.
(3)???? _______has caused quite a stir among the general public.
(4)???? As regards ______, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society.
(5)???? Opinions vary when it comes to _________.
第二句:敘述正方觀點
Some argue/maintain/believe/suggest/hold that ________.
第三句:敘述反方觀點
(1)???? Nevertheless, other people adopt a completely different view. They believe that ______.
(2)???? However, those who strongly oppose are not among the minority. They hold that _____.
第四句:利弊關(guān)系(另起一段)
(1)???? When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to be in favor of the former/latter one in that _____. (犀利)
(2)???? When considering opinions of both sides, I find they are of the equal weight in that _____. (中庸)
(3)???? Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. (中庸)
萬能經(jīng)典(雙刃劍):
(4)???? ______ is just like a double-edged sword. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use, always being a master instead of slave of them. (中庸)
(5)???? Accordingly, we might as well avoid those undesirable effects, when making full use of it. (中庸)
或者直接寫上自己的觀點,用六脈神劍“獨”這步。
There is much controversy over whether technology plays an indispensable role in school. Some argue that advanced technology has brought much convenience to students, while enriching the teaching methods in class. However, others adopt a completely different view. They believe technology can be used as an auxiliary tool for interactive teaching and learning, but one can never rely too much on technology.
Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. However, to my knowledge, I am fully convinced that technology is not everything and one should be very prudent in using the technology.
模塊5:事例數(shù)據(jù)
第一句:引出事例
(1)???? I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following one.
(2)???? A case in point is that _____________________(句子).
(3)???? Numerous illustrations can be given, but this will suffice.
(4)???? For instance, __________________________.
(5)???? There are inspiring (好現(xiàn)象)/upsetting(壞現(xiàn)象) parallels today. _________(學霸版).
第二句:寫實際事例
自己準備一些萬能的例子,如果寫人類的精神,以下這個例子一般能用。
Take Steve Jobs, the Apple company founder, a great innovator, who strikes to the belief for his life time that __________ comes before victory, for instance. Without it, he couldn’t have built Apple into an incredibly successful company with a string of successes no one else can rival. (括號里填上creativity,就成了另一個例子)
舉例:
There is much controversy over the issue of whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. To my knowledge, online communication can replace the traditional way. Last year, I went to the US as an exchange student. I talked with my parents through skype and it was really convenient. We shared all the happiness and sadness on the internet and I could never forget that experience.
例文:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the impact of social networking websites on reading. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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“I love reading. I read about 3 hours a day.
My favorite book is Facebook*.”
*Facebook is the name of a social networking website.
? ? ? ?As we can see from the picture, two persons are discussing about reading. While to our amusement, the boy says his favorite book is Facebook. The picture seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts, which intends to inform us that the social network has exerted an important impact on our daily reading.
? ? ? ?Opinions vary when it comes to the impact of social networking websites on reading. Some people insist that social network provides them with large collections of information at a tremendous speed and stimulates their reading interest. On the contrary, other people claim that nowadays a host of youngsters pay so much attention to reading on social networks that they don’t have adequate opportunities or time to read traditional books.
? ? ? ?There is no surprise that there are different opinions about the impact of social networking websites on reading. However, as a college student, I am convinced that it is necessary for us to read on social networking websites, but it is of greater necessity for us to read traditional books. We can never overly depend on social network. Only in this way can we become more educated and have a more bright future.
2.??? 引言類模板
第一部分:概要
第一類引言:題目當中非常清晰地指出寫作的內(nèi)容。
如:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying “A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
題目要求圍繞著the impact of the information explosion來寫,并給出例證,解釋what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information.
第二類引言:題目當中并沒有指出寫作的內(nèi)容,只給引言。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on Albert Einstein’s remark “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” You can cite one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 but no more than 200 words.
針對于第二類引言,大家的當務(wù)之急就是從這句引言中,選擇一個合適的主題。注意:題干沒有給出要求,只要扣住引言,原理上都不偏題。比如:I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious. 顯然這句話的重心在curious上,講述了好奇心的重要性。用天龍八部的話說:Curiosity plays an extremely important role in achieving success. 或者Curiosity exerts a huge impact on one’s life and career.
第二部分:寫法
1. 經(jīng)典模塊版:
這種模式幫助各位同學迅速上手,在考場上構(gòu)思出一片上乘的佳作,再輔之以我前幾天的內(nèi)容,相信大家能在規(guī)定時間內(nèi)完成。
第一段:重述引言,并且講述引言的含義。
第一部分:重述引言
(1) Just as the saying goes, ______.
(2) It is often said that _______.
(3) An ancient philosopher once stated that _____.
第二部分:解釋含義
(1) The saying tells us that ________.
(2) The saying indicates that _______.
(3) The saying obviously emphasizes /highlights _____.
范例(大家注意例子的變化):
The famous scientist Albert Einstein once stated that “I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious.” Simple as the remark may sound, it intends to tell us that the importance of being curious. Being curious contributes greatly to our growth and eventually leads to our success.
第二段:討論引言的正確性,或者舉出實際例子來驗證引言。
第一部分:總起
There are several reasons contributing to the correctness of this principle.
Two factors, from my point of view, could account for the validity of this principle.
Why, you may wonder, is curiosity so important for our success?
第二部分:分述(詳見我的第一篇中六脈神劍,選擇合適的詞語)
To begin with, _________.
Furthermore, _________.
范例:
Two factors could account for the importance of being curious. To begin with, curiosity can be seen as the key to success. Only when one is curious about something will he dedicate himself to it. Take Thomas Edison for example, it was his curiosity that made him invent so many things for the future generations. Furthermore, curiosity provides us with the motivation to go forward and inspires us to learn new knowledge. As Apple Company founder Steve Jobs once said, “stay hungry, stay foolish.”
第三部分:兩種主要展開方式(解決倡導 + 總結(jié)觀點)
建議可以這樣來:
Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally argue that 總結(jié)一下文章。加幾句議論。
范例:
Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally argue that it is of great necessity for us to keep curious about the world. It is curiosity that may push the world exploration into the next step. Only in this way can we have a better world.
再來看一篇短小的參考范文:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. You can give explain to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
??? Choosing a right strategy can exert a huge impact on our success. An English saying goes like this: Don’t put all your eggs in one basket. What it wants to reveal is that it is unwise to be totally dependent on one resource.
?? ?There are several reasons contributing to the validity of this principle. To begin with, it is rather risky to put all the hope in one place. If one can have a contingency plan, it can deal with the unexpected when it comes to important event. What’s more, focusing on all the aspects at the same time contributes to a more balanced life. Suppose one would like to be admitted into a college. It is of vital importance for him to apply for several colleges. In this way, there is a better chance for him to be admitted.
Therefore, it is unadvisable to put everything on a single venture. Having a backup plan could help one lead a better life.
2. 個性特色版:
如果你要寫出自己的版本,那么考場上一定要注意時間。思路可以按照我以下的框架來搭,這種方法一般同學請慎重使用。
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Knowledge is a treasure, but practice is the key to it.” You can give an example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
?寫作思路:
第一段:敘述引出;
第二段:個人例證;
第三段:總結(jié)陳述。
范文(考神團隊 陳曲版):
It has been widely noted that it is of utmost importance for a man to be equipped with knowledge. Knowledge allows one to understand the history of the world, the secrets of the universe and the stories of celebrities. Consequently, one can consider knowledge as priceless treasure. However, a bellyful of theories but very little experience makes us somewhat bookish. Without much practice, we can hardly make use of knowledge, and hence fail to unlock the treasure of knowledge. As the saying goes, ”Practice makes perfect”.
As a chemistry student, I have learned virtually all the fundamental principles in the chemical world during my university life. I had felt rather conceited until one day my mom asked me an unexpected question, which had never been taught in textbooks, ”how to wipe off the yellow stain at the bottom of the tea cup”. After a serious thought, I was totally silent and did not have a single clue. Smiling happily, mom showed me how the use vinegar or radish water to eliminate the stain left by tea leaves. Perhaps this method could be attributed to the “acid-base” theory, but how can I possibly not come up with such an idea?
Based on my personal experience, it is quite obvious that knowledge will be of little use if we do not put it into practice. Rather, we should link what we learn with how we do things. Swimming in the ocean of knowledge, we should consider how to make the water more drinkable.????