背景介紹：
眾所周知，關(guān)愛留守兒童已經(jīng)成為了社會(huì)關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。目前，留守兒童的數(shù)量多，且監(jiān)護(hù)人多為孩子的爺爺奶奶等受教育程度較低的一群人。一些孩子們得到的物質(zhì)較為豐富，而精神和心靈層面的關(guān)愛比較貧乏，而另外一些孩子連最起碼的溫飽都是一個(gè)問題。我們要用愛走進(jìn)孩子們的心里，把更多的愛和呵護(hù)留給這些最可憐的孩子，讓他們都能夠健康快樂的成長(zhǎng)。

要點(diǎn)提示：
1、說明留守兒童是一個(gè)很嚴(yán)重的社會(huì)問題和家庭問題。
2、提出建議和方法，怎么解決留守兒童的身心健康問題。
3、最后總結(jié)，并提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

例文參考：
Leftover Children Should Be Loved

Most of us own a simple and good life. City born and city bred, we sometimes imagine the idyllic pastoral scene such as the friendly people, the clean atmosphere, the closeness to nature and the gentle pace of living. In face, everything has its pros and cons. The other side of picture is that leftover children have become a heavy topic nowadays, because most parents of these children consider that to feed their children well and to let them grow up health and safe in body are the most important task.However, as a matter of fact, in addition to provide the basic needs for their children, parents should pay more attention to their children’s psychological needs and their education.

For one thing, parents who cannot accompany their children often need to pay more attention to their children’s psychological needs.Therefore, it seems to me that government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays and organize" hand-in-hand" activity to call on more people to help them. We can also raise money to donate to these children. As the song says:"If everyone gives their love, the world will be better." It's very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.

For another, education of leftover children is also quite important. As the saying goes, “knowledge can change our fate”, education is an effective way to change the future of those children. In order to make those leftover children grow up in health, therefore, we need to show more concern about their psychological needs and their education.

In my view, leftover children should be encouraged to live with or near their parents, which is very helpful for them to be loved and concerned, they also can have a simple and good life.

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