4. 時態(tài)混亂

原：Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.

改：Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.

評：過去時的句子中冒出了現(xiàn)在時，同學你太粗心了，要仔細檢查哦~

原：I would explain my view in the following paragraphs.

改：I’d like to explain… / I will explain…

評：可能是兩種說法記混了吧，結(jié)果把時態(tài)搞錯了……

5. 主謂不一致

原：The way we deal with the environmental problems are crucial to the prosperity of human-being.

改：The way we deal with the environmental problems is crucial to the prosperity of human-being.

評：謂語之前有兩個名詞時，主謂搭配的問題就常常出現(xiàn)了。這里真正的主語應(yīng)該是單數(shù)名詞the way，所以與之搭配的謂語也應(yīng)該是單數(shù)的is。

6. 重復(fù)累贅

原：From my point of view, I think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help learning a foreign country.

改：From my point of view, this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help us learn a foreign country.

評：from my point of view和I think重復(fù)啦，保留一個就好。當然這里建議留下更“高級”的from my point of view.

原：There are the majority of people who deem that they like to spend money on things which can bring them long memory.

改：Majority of the people like to spend money on things that can be memorized for long.

評：中文句式說的“有很多人……”，但別一看到“有”就非要用there be句型不可哦，直接擺出主謂賓就行了。

“things that can be memorized for long”，被動語態(tài)明顯更地道~

7. 中式英語

原：Thus, one is easier to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.

改：Thus, it’s easier for you to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.

評：中文習慣說“人們可以更容易地吸引老板的注意力”，而英語則習慣說“It’s easier for sb. to…”同學們要注意中英表述習慣的區(qū)別哦!

托福寫作中的語法錯誤是考生很難避免的一大難題，大家只能通過不斷的練習和修改、分析來逐步提高，可以多看一些托福寫作范文，積累相關(guān)句型和模板，以減少失誤。

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