IELTS essays – 3,4, or 5 paragraphs?雅思大作文到底寫幾段?
Is there an ideal number of paragraphs to an IELTS essay? I have recently come across two pieces of advice on IELTS forums on this topic that I happen to disagree with. One is that there is no problem with writing a 3 paragraph essay and the other is that the “ideal” number of paragraphs is 5. In this post I am going to look at this issue and put forward my point of view.
3 paragraphs
One piece of advice I met was that the only requirement was to write an essay of at least 250 words and so it was open to the candidate to write a 3 paragraph essay. Well, let’s see. It is true that 250 words is a requirement and the official advice is that you will be penalised if you write fewer words.
It’s not, however, that straightforward. The standard instructions start by asking you to write an essay for an educated reader with no specialist knowledge and almost invariably use similar wording to this:
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence
The key word here is “arguments“: ie you need more than one argument and in a correctly constructed essay each argument requires a separate paragraph. So if you accept that you also need a separate introduction and conclusion, then you should see that you will need at least 4 paragraphs. Can you write 3 paragraphs? Yes, but to use a nice English idiom, you are playing with fire and you may get penalised.?三段論并不是很好的結(jié)構(gòu),因?yàn)樵谖闹幸话阋U述論點(diǎn),而且為了讓文章結(jié)構(gòu)顯得清晰,最好每個(gè)自然段討論一個(gè)論點(diǎn),如果你有兩個(gè)或兩個(gè)以上的論點(diǎn),那除了開頭段和結(jié)尾段,勢(shì)必還需要其他幾個(gè)自然段,因此用三段式很容易因?yàn)檫壿嫴磺灞豢鄯帧?/p>
5 paragraphs – a must? 五段式不是必須的!
What about 5 paragraphs then? One piece of advice I saw was you must write 5 paragraphs. “Must” here is nonsense. Youcan write 5 paragraphs, but there is no must about it. I would go further than that, must isn’t just wrong here, for me it isdangerously wrong. Always beware of IELTS trainers who use the word must – there is almost always another way – the only must in IELTS is to answer the question. 5 paragraphs may be right for them, but that does not mean it is right for you: you are yourself, your language level and learning style may well mean you will do it another way. More than that, in the exam you need a plan B. What happens when your 5 paragraph plan doesn’t fit the essay question?
The best advice is to be prepared to write either a 4 or 5 paragraph essay. Look at the question, make your decision.考前最好四段式和五段式都練習(xí)一下!
4 paragraphs – why
This is my general preference for argument based essays. Let me explain why.
To be efficient you don’t want to write more than 270 words or so. If you choose 5 paragraphs, you may become inefficient by writing too many words. 寫起來更有效率,不容易超字?jǐn)?shù)。
You should develop your paragraphs properly – this is important for coherence and cohesion. In the five paragraph structure coherence between the paragraphs is less straightforward. 在段落里面,論證要充分,銜接和連貫性都很重要!
It is typically more impressive to write more about less, than less about more.
In an exam simple is good: if you have a argument based essay, the simplest structure possible is the for and against structure with one well-developed content paragraph for and one against. In a 5 paragraph essay what is the purpose of the 5th paragraph? Frequently it is an undeveloped conclusion or introduction – neither of which is good. 針對(duì)考試簡單就是美,針對(duì)一個(gè)論點(diǎn),最好是支持的一段,但對(duì)的一段就夠了~
5 paragraphs – why
I don’t want to make the opposite mistake of saying you must write 4 paragraphs. So here are some reasons why you might choose a 5 paragraph structure:
You are a “top” level candidate aiming for a score of 8 or above – ie you are at the very highest learner level of English. In this case it can often be easier to write more words than fewer words.針對(duì)基礎(chǔ)好想拿8分及以上的烤鴨,五段式讓你更有發(fā)揮空間。
You are a “l(fā)ow” level candidate aiming for a score around 5.0 – 5.5. At this level it can sometimes be difficult to extend your ideas as you do not have the words, so 3 shorter content paragraphs make sense. 水平在5分至5.5分左右的烤鴨,可以采用寫三個(gè)短段落來闡述觀點(diǎn),如果你確實(shí)沒什么好說的。
In the argument based essay, you prefer a structure where you argue more on one side than the other, so you use two content paragraphs arguing for and one against 議論文總會(huì)有一方是你比較支持的,五段式可以讓你在支持的觀點(diǎn)上多發(fā)揮一點(diǎn)~
You get a question you don’t like at all and your standard structure doesn’t fit. The only way you can get to 250 words is by writing 5 paragraphs.
The ideal
I can’t give you that answer: it depends on who you are and what the question is. 最好的方法一定是只適合你自己的方法!
Good Luck!?