【雅思寫作】大作文的用詞和句法技巧之二
5. 動(dòng)詞并列:
a). …v1,v2+ing,v3+ing…
b). s1+v1+ing,s2+v2…
i. An absent-minded teacher lacks drive to make class intensely focused, often preparing nothing in advance,wandering among random topics, thus wasting and killing times of industrial students.
ii. As a result of this, food dealers have made huge profit from it, thereby promoting the sector as well as creating more jobs.
6. 句子并列:
a). …, and therefore/thus/consequently
b). not only/simply/merely…but also/…as well/even…
c). neither…nor
d). not that…but that…
e). that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句
f). that引導(dǎo)的定語從句
g). that引導(dǎo)的主語從句
i. Books keep records of thoughts and ideas, and are therefore the major source from which people obtain knowledge.
ii. Chinese children unfortunately have few rights to make their own decisions, and consequently often have to do things that they do not enjoy doing at all.
iii. Modern vehicles have extended the range of people’s activity, and thus made much more goods available to local markets.
iv. Computers have not only brought convenience, but they have also made people learn more.
v. Not that emails or telephones have made people less personal, but that people themselves have become less personal. One of several possible reasons is that people usually lack of adequate communicating skills.
vi. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.
二、從句的使用
從句的使用是提高寫作得分最有效的一種手段,雅思寫作中主要涉及的從句主要是名詞性從句,狀語從句和定語從句,朗閣海外考試研究中心建議考生既可以單獨(dú)使用這些從句來組織句子,還可以采用從句套從句的方式來提高句型的復(fù)雜度。
7. 從句套從句:
i. Those who feel that sports stars salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent is very few, and the money is the recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. 賓語從句+定語從句+表語從句
ii. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. 定語從句+狀語從句
iii. The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. 賓語從句+定語從句
iv. But overall, I think that this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career. 賓語從句+非限制性定語從句
v. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people. 名詞性從句+狀語從句
三、倒裝句的使用
倒裝句的使用主要包括否定詞位于句首時(shí)的倒裝,比較句中第2個(gè)句子的倒裝和虛擬語氣條件句中的倒裝。
i. Not only should the parent spent more time with their children, they should also try to communicate with their children more often.
ii. Only in this way can this issue be effectively solved.
iii.? Nor a bad environment will make people healthier.
iv.? Only in very few regions do the residents have enough water for their daily needs.