不間斷句子（run-on sentences）
什么叫不間斷句子，請(qǐng)看下面的例子：
1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析：
這個(gè)句子包含了2層完整的意思“There are many ways”以及“we get to know the outside world”，簡(jiǎn)單地把它們連在一起就不妥當(dāng)了。
改為：There are many ways for us to get to know the outside world.或者There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
措辭毛?。╰roubles in diction）
措辭是指在特定的句子中如何恰當(dāng)?shù)剡x用詞語(yǔ)的問題，由于很多因素的制約，比如上課時(shí)間有限，老師在這方面作的指導(dǎo)相對(duì)來說就比較少，因此導(dǎo)致了學(xué)生在平時(shí)寫作中沒有養(yǎng)成良好的推敲，斟酌的習(xí)慣。他們往往隨心所欲，拿來就用。所以作文中措辭不當(dāng)?shù)牡胤奖缺冉允牵?/p>
1. The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
(農(nóng)業(yè)中不斷增加的化學(xué)物質(zhì)的使用也造成了污染)
分析：
顯然，考生把“obstacles”“障礙物”當(dāng)做“物質(zhì)”來使用了，另外，“the increasing use”（不斷增加的使用）應(yīng)該改為“abusive use”(濫用)。
改為：The abusive use of chemical substance in agriculture also leads to pollution.
累贅（redundancy）
強(qiáng)烈建議考生們?cè)趯懽髦姓Z(yǔ)言以簡(jiǎn)潔為貴，寫句子沒有一個(gè)多余的詞；寫段落沒有一個(gè)無必要的句子。能用單詞的不用詞組；能用詞組的不用從句或者句子，如：
1. In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
分析：
本句中的“In spite of the fact that he is lazy”是同位語(yǔ)從句，按照我們上面說的能用詞組不用從句，
改為：In spite of his laziness, I like him.
2. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the things they need.
分析：
整個(gè)句子太羅嗦，可以大大簡(jiǎn)化：
改為：Diligent, caring people use money only to buy things they need.
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