【雅思寫作】十大常見錯(cuò)誤透析(上)
懸垂修飾語(dangling modifiers)
所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語和后面的短語邏輯關(guān)系不清,如:
1. At the age of ten, my grandfather died.
分析:
這句話“At the age of ten”只指出10歲時(shí),但并沒有指出誰10歲時(shí),按照一般的推理不可能是“my grandfather”,如果我們把這個(gè)懸垂修飾語改明確點(diǎn),句子就不會引起別人誤解了。
改為:When I was ten, my grandfather died.
2. To do well in college, good grades are essential.
分析:
句中不定式“To do well in college”邏輯主語不清。
改為:To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
詞性誤用(misuse of parts of speech)
分析認(rèn)為,詞性誤用通常表現(xiàn)為:介詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用,形容詞當(dāng)副詞用,名詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用等,如:
1. None can negative the importance of money.
分析:
Negative是形容詞,誤作動(dòng)詞使用。
改為:None can deny the importance of money.
指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)
指代不清主要指代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清,或者先后使用的代詞不一致,如:
1. Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to become her bridesmaid.
分析:
讀完上面這句話后,作者無法明確判斷兩位姑娘中誰將結(jié)婚,誰將當(dāng)伴娘。如果我們把易于引起誤解的代詞的所指對象明確,意思就一目了然了。
改為:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to become her bridesmaid.
2. We can also know the society by serving it yourself.
分析:
句中代詞we和反身代詞yourself指代不一致。
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