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2023年6月英語作文范文：網(wǎng)上購物

Directions Write an essay based on the following chart in your writing, you should

1)interpret the chart, and

2)give your comments You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

作文范文

The column chart above illustrates the online shopping transactions and the growth rate in China from 2001 to 2008. During the period, there was a dramatic increase from 0.6 billion in 2001 to 125 billion in 2008 in the transaction. Meanwhile, the growth rate decreased from 200% to 110.4 %, a decline of about 90%.

While online shopping is not without its risks, it offers an excellent alternative to traditional shopping for people. The first reason that e-shopping is so appealing is its relative ease and convenience. The second advantage of online shopping is that it is available 24/7. Being able to shop at any and all hours of the day is not only conducive to the late nights associated with the modern lifestyle, but also means that people no longer have to plan their activities around stores’ opening hours.

However, there are also a few caveats that young people should bear in mind. Firstly, the speed and convenience of e-shopping may encourage frivolous or unnecessary spending by inducing people to buy more than they had initially intended. Secondly, there is a chance that those people who are already introverted may become even more alienated from the outside world.

參考譯文

上述柱狀圖揭示了 2001 至 2008 年中國網(wǎng)購交易額和增長率。在此期間，在交易額方面，從2001年的6億元急劇增長到 2008 年的 1250 億元。同時，增長率從 200%下降到 110.4%，下降了約 90%。

盡管網(wǎng)上購物并非零風險，但它相對于傳統(tǒng)的購物方式，為人們提供了一個極好的選擇。 網(wǎng)上購物如此吸引人們的第一個原因就是，它相對地容易和方便。網(wǎng)購的第二個好處就是購 物沒有任何時間限制。在一天任何時候都可以買東西，不但對有晚睡習慣的人們有好處，而 且也意味著人們不再必須按照商店營業(yè)時間來計劃自己的活動了。

然而，年輕人也應該在心里記住幾點忠告。首先，網(wǎng)購的快速和方便也常誘導人們很輕 率地購買比預計要多得多的不需要的東西。其次，那些本來內(nèi)向的人們甚至會與外面的世界 更加疏遠。

作文亮點詞匯

column chart 柱狀圖

above 上述

illustrate 揭示

online shopping 網(wǎng)上購物

transaction 交易額

growth rate 增長率

during the period 在此期間

dramatic 急劇的

meanwhile 同時

percent 百分比

decline 下降

while 盡管

without its risk 零風險

offer 提供

excellent 極好的

alternative 選擇

traditional 傳統(tǒng)的

e-shopping 網(wǎng)上購物

appealing 吸引人的

relative 相對

ease 容易

convenience 方便

available 可獲得的

is conducive to 對...有好處

late nights 晚睡

associate with 與······相聯(lián)系

modern lifestyle 現(xiàn)代生活

mean 意味著

activity 活動

opening hour 營業(yè)時間

make purchase 購物

caveat 忠告

bear in mind 牢記

speed 速度

encourage 鼓勵

frivolous 輕佻的

unnecessary 不需要的

spending 花費

induce 誘導

initially 本來

intend 計劃

introverted 內(nèi)向的

alienated 疏遠的

outside world 外部世界

作文點評

國內(nèi)考試寫作部分已多次考察與“網(wǎng)絡”相關(guān)的話題，分別是 2007 年英語專業(yè)四級真題 “Is It Wise to Make Friends Online”(是否應該網(wǎng)上交友)，2009 年考研寫作真題“網(wǎng)絡 的近與遠”，2011 年 6 月四級寫作真題“Online Shopping”和 2012 年 6 月六級寫作真題“The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication”。

作文經(jīng)典句型

1、 The third and perhaps biggest draw of e-shopping is that it allows students to find the cheapest possible price at the click of a button.第三個也可能是最大的誘人之處在于，網(wǎng) 購允許人們只要點下按鈕就可以找到最便宜的可能售價。

2、 Since the 1990s, however, young people in mounting numbers have turned to the net to acquire a range of student essentials from reference book and writing utensils to clothing and electronics.然而自從 20 世紀 90 年代開始，越來越多的年輕人開始在網(wǎng)上購買一系 列學生必需品——從參考書、文具到衣服、電子產(chǎn)品。

3、 If taken to an extreme, online shopping may cause shy or reserved students to live even more reclusive lifestyles, to the detriment of both their social and physical well-being.更 極端地，網(wǎng)上購物也許會讓害羞或矜持的學生以更加封閉的方式生活，這對他們的人際 交往與身體健康都有害處。

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