2021年6月英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文解析(滬江網(wǎng)校)
2021年6月六級(jí)寫(xiě)作解析
這次六級(jí)寫(xiě)作考了圖表作文,有些出乎意料。考雅思的同學(xué)是不是感覺(jué)似曾相識(shí)?不過(guò),六級(jí)作文和雅思小作文還是有很大區(qū)別的。從題目的寫(xiě)作要求可以看出,考生不僅要把圖表解釋清楚,還要對(duì)圖表內(nèi)容作出自己的評(píng)價(jià),也就是說(shuō),還要給出自己的見(jiàn)解。
考察的題目都屬于中國(guó)的成就,包括脫貧,城市化進(jìn)程和高等教育的發(fā)展。在描述圖標(biāo)后,考生可以從列舉現(xiàn)象和分析原因2方面來(lái)寫(xiě)。
作文依然采用三步走(總分總)的寫(xiě)作框架。第一段描述圖表;第二段列舉現(xiàn)象或分析原因;第三段總結(jié)概括。
這里是一篇范文供大家參考。
The bar chart?issued by Ministry of Education contains?the gross enrolment ratio in higher education in China from 3.4% in the year of 1990 to 51.6% in 2019. Obviously, what it endeavors / tries to convey is that?this era has witnessed an enormous increase in China's higher education development.
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As far as I am concerned, the increase is due to three main reasons. Firstly,?the government has provided a series of beneficial policies and financial investment in ensuring citizens the opportunity of receiving higher education. Students, even poor ones in rural counties will be encouraged to attend universities after middle school. Interest-free loans are provided to students who cannot afford the fees. Secondly,?the growing per capita GDP has shifted parents' opinion from earning money as soon as their children grow up to equipping them with more specialized knowledge for long-term development. Last but not least,?due to the research achievements and the improvement of education?level, China's institutions of higher education are now highly admitted. We can find from the QS World University Ranking list that Qinghua University and Beijing University have peaked in this year.
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In a nutshell, China has witnessed a great progress in its higher education, which enables more citizens to achieve a higher degree and provides more specialized knowledge in pursuing a fulfilling life.
范文使用了老師講過(guò)的框架。劃線部分是可以套用的模板,大家根據(jù)話題把要展開(kāi)的內(nèi)容填補(bǔ)進(jìn)去就可以了。注意在列舉原因或現(xiàn)象時(shí)可以從不同角度切入,如范文分別從政府、家長(zhǎng)和學(xué)校三個(gè)方面展開(kāi)。
以上,祝大家能夠取得理想的成績(jī)。
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