2020年12月12日大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作解析

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本次六級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作題目依舊為抽象題目，考察類(lèi)型為論述型文章。三卷的話題分別是“Why should students develop communication skills?”、“Why should students develop creativity?”、“Why should students take challenges?”。以上主題均與學(xué)生的個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)有關(guān)，并在已經(jīng)預(yù)設(shè)“should”的前提下要求考生列舉理由。因此，考生須注意切勿落入“正反討論”的習(xí)慣模式中，而應(yīng)當(dāng)按題目要求為正方觀點(diǎn)提供理由。

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字?jǐn)?shù)要求依舊為150-200字，就論述類(lèi)文章而言，除卻開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾的題目重述和觀點(diǎn)總結(jié)外，在主體段提供2-3個(gè)理由用以支撐論點(diǎn)即可完成字?jǐn)?shù)要求。我們用其中的一個(gè)主題為例，使用傳統(tǒng)模板寫(xiě)成下文，在沒(méi)有重大錯(cuò)誤的情況下，依然可以達(dá)到11分的檔次，供大家體會(huì)模板的作用：

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Why student should be encouraged to develop creativity

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The pace of change in the world is accelerating rapidly and it will continue to change with the development of new technologies. This means that the way we live and work in the past might no longer be appropriate in the coming future. In order to succeed, a powerful way to empower ourselves is to develop creativity.

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First, being creative helps us become a better problem solver in all areas of our life and work. When trying to find the solution to a problem, thinking creatively allows us to look at the situation from different angles, which opens up the possibilities. Second, being creative helps us better deal with uncertainty. In a constantly changing world, nobody can fully predict what the future holds. New challenges pop up every day, and the old ways of doing things are probably useless. Being creative is how we get unique ideas and how innovators set themselves apart. Third, being creative helps us develop confidence. Being creative comes with many ups and downs and a high risk of failure. Engaging in the creative process is a great confidence builder, because you discover that failure is part of the process.

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In conclusion, creativity is no longer just seen as what artists and musicians possess. It’s a crucial skill for professionals in all fields. It is high time that we took actions to develop creativity. Only in this way can we be successful in this constantly changing world.

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上文首段開(kāi)頭即使用了常見(jiàn)模板The pace of change in the world is accelerating rapidly and it will continue to change with …. ?該句概括描述了當(dāng)今社會(huì)“快速變化”的現(xiàn)實(shí)背景，亦為展開(kāi)討論的大前提。其后，This means that … in the past might no longer be appropriate in the coming future.表明“社會(huì)變化”影響，亦即展開(kāi)討論的小前提。最后引出觀點(diǎn)句，即In order to succeed, a powerful way to empower ourselves is to … 在此文章中，模板中的powerful way即為creativity。

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主體段整體結(jié)構(gòu)較為簡(jiǎn)潔和清晰，以first, second和third分別引出三個(gè)理由，且理由間呈并列邏輯關(guān)系。理由一中，When trying to find the solution to a problem, …使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句與伴隨狀語(yǔ)相結(jié)合的復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，提升了句式難度，同時(shí)省略不確定的主語(yǔ)，適當(dāng)簡(jiǎn)化表達(dá)；… thinking creatively allows us to look at the situation from different angles, which opens up the possibilities.使用了非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，避免了前后兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句的尷尬。理由二中，… nobody can fully predict what the future holds.使用了賓語(yǔ)從句，且the future holds sth.是加分表達(dá)，意為 “未來(lái)蘊(yùn)藏著某物”。理由三中，Being creative comes with many ups and downs and a high risk of failure.使用come with表達(dá)“前者的發(fā)生導(dǎo)致后者”的含義，可用以替換常見(jiàn)的因果連詞。

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結(jié)尾段中，… creativity is no longer just seen as what artists and musicians possess.一句使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)與賓語(yǔ)從句，意為“創(chuàng)造性不再被看作是藝術(shù)家和音樂(lè)家的特質(zhì)”。結(jié)尾It is high time that …意為“該是時(shí)候做某事”，此亦為表“倡議、呼吁”含義的通用結(jié)尾模板。
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本文整體內(nèi)容較為翔實(shí)，但本質(zhì)上依然是已構(gòu)造好的模板的使用。對(duì)模板的靈活使用，可以為自己的寫(xiě)作增加重量，與此同時(shí)，考生也能從模仿到創(chuàng)新，逐漸形成自己的寫(xiě)作風(fēng)格。希望以上分析對(duì)大家有啟發(fā)和幫助，祝大家都能取得理想的成績(jī)！