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第四部分寫作(共兩節(jié).滿分35分)

第一節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)(共1t;小魔:每小題1分.滿分l0分)

(注意:在試題卷上作答無效)
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷:如無錯(cuò)誤.在該行右邊?板線上畫一個(gè)勾(√):如有錯(cuò)誤(每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤)，則按下列情況改正:?
此行多一個(gè)詞:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
此行缺一個(gè)詞:在缺詞處加一個(gè)腸字符號(hào)(A)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
注意:原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改。

Every one of us can make a great efforts to __76___

cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all __77___

of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only __78___

when we have a real need. That won't be easy ,I know. __79___

but we have to start anywhere. What's more, we can go to __80___

work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy ___81___

smaller cars that bum less oil. Other way is to watch our ____82____

everyday use of water and electric at home. For example,_____83___

how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the _____84____

lights or television when no one else was there? ___85____?

【答案及解析】

76. a ? 去掉a make great efforts。

77. off錯(cuò)誤。off 改為down, cut down 切斷。

78. to? ?reducing to the use，去掉to。

79. √

80. anywhere錯(cuò)誤。anywhere 改為 somewhere。

81. and錯(cuò)誤。 and 改為 or。

82. Other錯(cuò)誤。Other 改為 Another。

83.?electric錯(cuò)誤。electric 改為 electricity。

84. leave錯(cuò)誤。 leave 改為 left。

85. on。 leave the lights or television on。