考研英語(yǔ)培訓(xùn):如何用好作文模板
備戰(zhàn)考研英語(yǔ)作文免不了要背范文和模板,如何背如何用才能夠杜絕千篇一律的單調(diào)呢,結(jié)合一道非常具有代表性的真題來(lái)進(jìn)行作文模板的分析,看看這篇文章對(duì)你有沒(méi)有什么啟發(fā)。滬江小編希望大家能在考試的時(shí)候更好的運(yùn)用模板。
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
大家肯定對(duì)這道題十分熟悉。按照大作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的“內(nèi)容完整”,我們需要將大作文寫成3段話:第一段“描述圖畫”;第二段“闡述寓意”;第三段“個(gè)人評(píng)論”。這三個(gè)要求根本不用去記,因?yàn)轭}目當(dāng)中已經(jīng)有了。
第一段的段落思路:“直觀評(píng)價(jià)、整體描述、細(xì)節(jié)描述、過(guò)渡句”。
第一句我們只需要對(duì)這幅圖畫進(jìn)行直觀評(píng)價(jià)就可以了??梢詫懗蒞hat an interesting picture it is! 怎么記?只要記住這是一個(gè)感嘆句句式即可。第二句記憶的時(shí)候,弄清楚前后兩個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。As is vividly depicted in the photo, a hot pot is boiling a lot of different things with much hot steam gushing, which successfully captures our eyes. 第三句可以寫成After a close watch, it is not difficult to find that many kinds of culture have been mixed in the same small hot pot, symbolizing the exchange of many different kinds of culture from all over the world. 在記憶的時(shí)候,只需記住是“狀語(yǔ)+it形式主語(yǔ)句+主干”即可。Apparently, what the drawing has subtly conveyed deserves a further analysis. 這是最后一句,相信大家能立馬分清:這是主語(yǔ)從句。
接著看第二段。第二段的思路是:“關(guān)鍵句(總)、具體原因(分)、結(jié)果分析”。
例子:
Theoretically, the phenomenon presented by the drawing brings us both advantages and disadvantages. As for my part, the former outweighs its latter. On the top of list is that the same earth village could bring us much more commerce opportunities, which help the whole development of the world. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is no doubt that more friendly cooperation from different countries may promote the development of diplomatic relations between countries. No other case can better illustrate the phenomenon than the picture above.
其實(shí),第一句就是“主謂賓”的結(jié)構(gòu),后面的原因句子,“On the top of list is that...”是我們教大家的框架句子?!癐n addition, there is the other point that...”這樣的句式其實(shí)就是就是“There be +that從句”。
來(lái)看最后一段。段落思路是“關(guān)鍵句+具體建議+結(jié)尾句”。由于本題屬于“社會(huì)現(xiàn)象”,所以可以寫成以下段落。記憶這些句子時(shí),注意句式:it形式主語(yǔ)句式、倒裝句等。
According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to maximize its positive effects and minimize the disadvantages. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we make the best of the value of global communication between mass kinds of culture .
所以同學(xué)們?cè)跍?zhǔn)備考研英語(yǔ)作文時(shí)一定要把握住每個(gè)段落的思路,每個(gè)句式的特點(diǎn)。一定要弄清楚每個(gè)句子怎么構(gòu)成的,只有先理解句子的語(yǔ)法構(gòu)成,才能順利記住這些“神通廣大”的句子,并且將它們補(bǔ)齊寫成自己特有的亮點(diǎn)句子。