分析了近3年的四級(jí)作文題目 ，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)了這些套路
寫(xiě)作，四六級(jí)考試中神奇的一個(gè)板塊。
普遍反應(yīng)拉不開(kāi)差距的是寫(xiě)作，
四六級(jí)上岸之前差的那“臨門(mén)一腳”往往也是寫(xiě)作。
對(duì)于基礎(chǔ)較為薄弱的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō)，寫(xiě)作就是幫你彌補(bǔ)聽(tīng)力閱讀的“救命稻草”！
對(duì)于想要拿高分的同學(xué)來(lái)說(shuō)，寫(xiě)作也決定了你是否能擺脫“中上”的分?jǐn)?shù)段，高分上岸。
今天@滬江英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)微信公眾號(hào)特來(lái)分析下作文的出題套路和做題方式，希望能幫大家更有的放矢地復(fù)習(xí)作文。
下面是@滬江英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)微信公眾號(hào)為大家整理出的近三年四級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作真題，一起來(lái)看看吧~
搜集近三年四級(jí)考試的作文題目，我們可以看到，四級(jí)作文命題越來(lái)越看重實(shí)用性和時(shí)效性。 ? ? ? ? ??
在2020年7月到2023年3月的四級(jí)考試中，共計(jì)24篇作文，其中應(yīng)用文高達(dá)9篇。
剩余13篇可以分為三個(gè)大類(lèi)：現(xiàn)象類(lèi)、說(shuō)明類(lèi)、議論類(lèi)，以及23年加考的一篇書(shū)籍介紹和研討會(huì)記錄。
另外，所有作文的行文都緊緊圍繞著“校園（學(xué)生）、科技（衍生產(chǎn)品及所帶來(lái)的影響）”兩大主題。
注：本文所用真題范文均為滬江網(wǎng)校教研原創(chuàng)，未經(jīng)授權(quán)，禁止轉(zhuǎn)載。
01 應(yīng)用文
與其他文體不同，應(yīng)用文更加看重格式。不同的文體書(shū)寫(xiě)的格式也不盡相同。在我們遇到應(yīng)用文時(shí)，只要對(duì)癥下藥，找對(duì)格式，然后根據(jù)題干要求，“有求必應(yīng)”，就能一舉拿下應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作！
以下是近三年四級(jí)寫(xiě)作應(yīng)用文給類(lèi)別的出現(xiàn)頻率：
建議書(shū)x3, 計(jì)劃書(shū)x2，報(bào)告x2，申請(qǐng)x1，邀請(qǐng)x1
@滬江英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)微信公眾號(hào)為大家總結(jié)了以上格式的范文模板，一起來(lái)積累吧~
建議書(shū)
寫(xiě)作分三步走：
自我介紹、說(shuō)明來(lái)意——具體建議——希望對(duì)方采納、期盼回復(fù)。
行文舉例：
Dear ____,(稱(chēng)呼可齊頭可縮進(jìn))
I am... I am writing to...(主體內(nèi)容)
Looking forward to your reply. / Hoping to hear from you soon. / Wishing you...(結(jié)束語(yǔ))
Yours sincerely(署名)____
經(jīng)典表達(dá)：
常用詞匯/短語(yǔ)
feasible 可行的
put forward some advice 提出建議
with regard to 關(guān)于;至于
be beneficial to 對(duì)……有益
decision-making 決策
take measures 采取措施
be of great importance 很重要
improve the efficiency 提高效率
foresee a future 預(yù)見(jiàn)未來(lái)
常用句型
(1)表明寫(xiě)信意圖：
I am writing this letter to render/give some suggestions on...(寫(xiě)信人主動(dòng)提出建議)
You have consulted me for some advice about how to..., so I would try to make some constructive suggestions.(寫(xiě)信人受邀給出建議)
(2)提出建議：
I think?it?would?be?beneficial?if?you?could...
(3)表達(dá)希望：
I would be more than happy if my suggestions could be considered and positive changes could take place in these regards.
真題來(lái)源：(2022.6＆9，2023.3）
計(jì)劃書(shū)
計(jì)劃書(shū)是應(yīng)用文中較為簡(jiǎn)單的一個(gè)類(lèi)別，對(duì)格式的要求也相對(duì)較低，計(jì)劃書(shū)一般是圍繞著某個(gè)活動(dòng)的舉辦而寫(xiě)作的，
所以我們一般采用這種結(jié)構(gòu)：背景→舉辦原因→內(nèi)容主體（根據(jù)題干要求分條陳述）→表達(dá)希望。
行文舉例：
Nowadays, ... is of utmost importance.（背景論述）
With the propose of ....., .....（sb.） is planning to organize a ......（舉辦原因）
This program, organized by......is......... It includes.......（根據(jù)題干要求進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充）
All my wishes for success go to this activity.（結(jié)尾表示對(duì)此次活動(dòng)的期望與祝愿）。
真題來(lái)源：（2021.12）
proposal for holding a college-wide English public speaking contest
Dear Sir or Madam:
I'm 名字, a second-year student from Business Department. I'm writing to make a proposal about holding a college-wide English public speaking contest with the topic of "University as I see it".
The aims of the contest are twofold. First, students all over the University are offered an opportunity to demonstrate their ability to communicate effectively in English. Second, the contest could serve as a forum for students from different background to share their insights and experiences. It is important to note that only a current undergraduate student is eligible for the contest. Each of the contestants would be asked to deliver a prepared speech of 5 minutes and an impromptu speech based on the topic assigned after the prepared speech. The contest would be an off-line event at the International Conference Hall on 日期. A panel from the ESL faculty shall select five finalists from all participants. The finalists would present their speeches after which three winners (and two honorable mentions) would be chosen.?
I'm looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much for everything you've done. Wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,?
名字
Proposal for an Orientation Program
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m 名字. I’m writing to make a proposal to conduct an orientation program for freshmen. The major purpose of the orientation program is to enable freshmen to adapt to the campus environment and academic life as soon as possible. The duration of the project is expected to be one week. Participants include all freshmen, teachers and academic staff.
The orientation is divided into three parts: a school lecture, a student activity and a campus tour. In the school lecture, we will introduce the school background, professional training objectives and how to select courses, so as to help students quickly embark on their learning journey. At the student activity, there will be some interesting games to help freshmen get to know each other quickly and make contacts. The last part is a campus tour, where students will visit the school's teaching building, library, restaurant, and so on, so as to help them to quickly adjust to campus life.
I hope the freshmen can quickly adapt to the new environment and academic studies through this orientation. I’m looking forward to your reply. Wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
名字
報(bào)告
報(bào)告是針對(duì)過(guò)去發(fā)生的活動(dòng)或者事件的陳述，報(bào)告強(qiáng)調(diào)的是facts。陳述的客觀(guān)性是報(bào)告文體的特點(diǎn)，所以我們?cè)趯?xiě)報(bào)告時(shí)不能帶有個(gè)人色彩，要避免反問(wèn)句一類(lèi)的口語(yǔ)化表達(dá)。
行文舉例：
Report on .......（標(biāo)題）
On...（時(shí)間）...went to...(導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：揭示核心內(nèi)容).
After their arrival, they...... Then they..... When......(正文：對(duì)事件或人物進(jìn)行詳細(xì)描寫(xiě)).
What they did has......./This activity/ program has.....(結(jié)束語(yǔ)：概括、總結(jié)或預(yù)測(cè))
真題來(lái)源：（2021.12，2022.9）
Report on Used Books Collecting on Campus
I have just participated in a school project of collecting used books on campus which I find really rewarding. Here are some details of the project.
The aim of the project is to donate books to a primary school in a small village outside the town. Meanwhile, it's also aimed to protect the environment by recycling old books. Both the students and the teachers on campus participated in the project. What's more, some of the graduates also came back and gave away their books. All the books collected were to enlarge the collection of the primary school's library. There were two activities in this project, book donation and charity bazaar of old books. Both achieved great success in collecting used books.?
We are very happy to report that, by now, about 1,500 books have been collected and the number is still growing. I hope more and more activities of this kind will be held on campus in the following days.,
申請(qǐng)書(shū)
申請(qǐng)書(shū)和自薦信的寫(xiě)作方法相類(lèi)似。
寫(xiě)作目的→申請(qǐng)?jiān)颉枋鲎约旱膬?yōu)勢(shì)→懇請(qǐng)語(yǔ)
行文舉例：
I am writing this letter to apply for this chance as ......（寫(xiě)作目的）
申請(qǐng)?jiān)虿糠值膶?xiě)作較為靈活，沒(méi)有固定模板，但是我們一般可以采用轉(zhuǎn)折的手法來(lái)寫(xiě)作。
@滬江英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)微信公眾號(hào)萬(wàn)能公式↓
陳述現(xiàn)狀→指出現(xiàn)狀的不足之處→申請(qǐng)成功能夠如何改善現(xiàn)狀
As a......., I am ?committed to.... and have the confidence and strength in.....（闡述自身優(yōu)勢(shì)以及與申請(qǐng)的匹配度）
I will appreciate it very much if you can take me into consideration for this post.（懇請(qǐng)語(yǔ)）
真題來(lái)源：（2022.9）
邀請(qǐng)書(shū)
邀請(qǐng)函的格式較為統(tǒng)一，@滬江英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)微信公眾號(hào)為大家整理了一份通用模板，快拿出你的小本本，參考起來(lái)吧！
Dear,_______
? ? I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in at/in_________.It’s a long time since we have had the pleasure of seeing you and we do hope you can come.
? ? As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the _______ I am sure that you will be interested in_____. To begin with,_____.In addition,_______.Enclosed is the details of______.Your participation is very important because_______.
If you do not have any prior appointment on .We do hope that you can make it. If not, would it be possible for you to drop us a line before______?Thank you very much.
Yours sincerely,_________
真題來(lái)源：(2022.9)
02 現(xiàn)象類(lèi)
現(xiàn)象類(lèi)的作文顧名思義就是先給出一個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，然后讓考生圍繞這個(gè)現(xiàn)象展開(kāi)論述。
行文思路
引出現(xiàn)象（是什么）
分析現(xiàn)象背后的動(dòng)因（為什么）
評(píng)價(jià)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象（怎么樣）
啟示：這個(gè)現(xiàn)象反映出了什么？針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象，我們應(yīng)該怎么做？
行文舉例：
Recent years have witnessed _______（引出現(xiàn)象）
The root cause of the phenomenon is _______.（分析現(xiàn)象背后的動(dòng)因）
As far as I am concerned _______is advantageous/ toxic/double-edged sword.
On one hand..On the other hand_______（評(píng)價(jià)現(xiàn)象）
It is the epitome of _______./It embodies/reflect_______（現(xiàn)象反映出的內(nèi)容）
It is high time we did_______as a way to_______.（怎么做）
句子積累
It is commonly thought thanks to modem science and technology, great changes can be seen in our society, and humans have made stellar/notable progress in science and technology over the recent decades.
人們普遍認(rèn)為現(xiàn)代科技使我們的社會(huì)發(fā)生了翻天覆地的改變，近幾十年來(lái)人類(lèi)在科技方面取得了卓越的進(jìn)步。（交代背景）
In recent years,... is becoming increasingly prevalent/ is in vogue.
近些年來(lái)......越來(lái)越流行。（引出現(xiàn)象）
From what has been discussed above, conclusion can be drawn that...
根據(jù)以上討論，可以得出結(jié)論：（評(píng)價(jià)現(xiàn)象）
Having known the root causes of the phenomenon, it is high time for us to ...
在認(rèn)識(shí)現(xiàn)象背后的根源之后，我們是時(shí)候要...了（開(kāi)始論述做法）
真題來(lái)源：（2020.12）
Changes in the way of transportation
Thanks to the rapid development of automation and new technologies, means of transportation have changed fundamentally over the last few decades. Transformed travelling modes greatly improved people’s daily life.
To start with, the cost of transportation has dropped considerably. For example, flight and train tickets are much cheaper than before. What comes along with lower prices is more options. Besides, the speed and the level of comfort during the journey has tremendously improved. Moreover, a more extensive network allows people to travel freely not only within their usual living area, but also to farther parts of the world. The complex network of roads, highways, railways and air and sea routes connects all corners of the world.
To sum up, effective transportation systems will continue to bring convenience to people's lives. Some might argue against such stance because of the pollution caused by it, yet I’m still convinced that modern transportation system can benefit all humans.
03 描述說(shuō)明類(lèi)
描述說(shuō)明類(lèi)作文與現(xiàn)象類(lèi)作文最大的區(qū)別就是現(xiàn)象類(lèi)的寫(xiě)作主體是現(xiàn)象，而說(shuō)明類(lèi)的主體是物。（2020.7&9）
行文和現(xiàn)象類(lèi)相仿??
引出說(shuō)明對(duì)象（是什么）
簡(jiǎn)要分析說(shuō)明對(duì)象出現(xiàn)的原因（為什么）
PS：與現(xiàn)象類(lèi)文章不同，說(shuō)明類(lèi)文章不用花較多篇幅在“為什么”上。
評(píng)價(jià)說(shuō)明對(duì)象（怎么樣）
啟示：說(shuō)明對(duì)象反映出了什么？我們應(yīng)該如何對(duì)待這個(gè)對(duì)象？
行文舉例：
With the step of_______, _______sring up（引出說(shuō)明對(duì)象+交代原因）
As far as I am concerned ...is the locomotive / driver force /the hinder for/ a double-edged sword . ? ?On one hand..On the other hand....（評(píng)價(jià)對(duì)象）
The prevalence of_______mirrors_______
From what has been discussed above, what we should do is to_______（如何正確對(duì)待這一對(duì)象）
真題來(lái)源：（2020.7）
翻譯app的使用：
The use of translation apps is becoming increasingly popular. Why? Admittedly, in the contemporay society, an increasing number of people, with the help of translation apps, find it convenient to read foreign literature or essays.
On the one hand, these apps can bring users greater efficiency and help them save more time or energy, particularly for those who have no knowledge of a foreign language. For instance, a host of people may have a variety of difficulties or troubles in learning English, but with the assistance of these apps, it will not be difficult for them to read and understand English materials. On the other hand, it is these apps that cuase some learners to lose motivation for studying. With Apps in hand, they are not willing to do their utmost to memorize new words, pratice speaking or writing skills every day. Fianlly, they will fail to get a good command of any foreign language.
I, as a college student, deem that it is of great necessity for youngsters to use translations apps in a rational way. We should bear in mind that any translation app is merely a tool. Provided that one intends to master a foreign language, it is advisabel to practice each day instead of relying on translation apps.
04 觀(guān)點(diǎn)議論類(lèi)
觀(guān)點(diǎn)議論類(lèi)是四六級(jí)考試中極為常見(jiàn)的一種寫(xiě)作類(lèi)型。這類(lèi)作文一般會(huì)在兩種情況下出現(xiàn)。??
情況1： 在題干中給出一個(gè)有爭(zhēng)議的問(wèn)題，考生需要給出自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)并提供有力的論據(jù)支持自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，這類(lèi)作文強(qiáng)調(diào)邏輯性和辯證性，一些有說(shuō)服力的舉例論證，羅列數(shù)據(jù)，都是加分項(xiàng)。
這類(lèi)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)較為清晰，一般是：交代觀(guān)點(diǎn)→論證觀(guān)點(diǎn)→辯證（可有可無(wú)）→聯(lián)系實(shí)際論述做法
情況2： 要求就某一話(huà)題展開(kāi)論述，考生需要圍繞該主題給出自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)并提供有力的論據(jù)支持自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，同樣需要邏輯性和辯證性，有舉例和數(shù)據(jù)更佳。
該類(lèi)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)一般是：交代觀(guān)點(diǎn)→論證觀(guān)點(diǎn)→聯(lián)系實(shí)際論述做法
行文舉例：
There is no consensus of opinions among people about ...(爭(zhēng)論的焦點(diǎn))。
Some people are of the view that 觀(guān)點(diǎn)1，while others take the opposite side, firmly believing that 觀(guān)點(diǎn)2。
As far as I am concerned, the former/ latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious. （交代觀(guān)點(diǎn)）
First of all, 論據(jù)1. Furthermore, 論據(jù)2. Among all of the supporting evidence, one is the strongest. That is, 論據(jù)3.
However, every corner has both sides, the former/ latter notion, in other word, also......（辯證，這一部分盡量簡(jiǎn)短）
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結(jié)觀(guān)點(diǎn)。
As a college student, I am supposed to...（聯(lián)系實(shí)際）
真題來(lái)源：（2022.12，2021.6）
以上就是@滬江英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)微信公眾號(hào)為大家奉上的四級(jí)寫(xiě)作備考干貨~在掌握這些“套路”之余，也要時(shí)刻謹(jǐn)記，現(xiàn)在四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作命題越來(lái)越靈活多變，我們也應(yīng)當(dāng)注重平時(shí)的積累，才能水到渠成。
比如2023年3月加考的兩篇作文??
1.介紹一本書(shū)并闡釋它的可讀之處
2.記錄一場(chǎng)學(xué)業(yè)規(guī)劃研討會(huì)的內(nèi)容并概述參與心得
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題目一不多說(shuō)，行文其實(shí)非常簡(jiǎn)單，只要介紹一本書(shū)再寫(xiě)出這本書(shū)的亮點(diǎn)即可。
但一些沒(méi)有閱讀習(xí)慣的考生可就在考場(chǎng)上抓瞎了，備考這類(lèi)作文只能通過(guò)平時(shí)培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣，或者至少對(duì)一些書(shū)籍的內(nèi)容有一定了解，才能“囊中有貨”。
題目二乍一看非常陌生，其實(shí)和我們的行文和議論類(lèi)寫(xiě)作大同小異。
第一部分我們需要記敘研討會(huì)的內(nèi)容，
第二部分我們就仿照觀(guān)點(diǎn)議論類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的情況2，就“學(xué)業(yè)規(guī)劃心得”展開(kāi)論述即可。
分析近三年的四級(jí)寫(xiě)作，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)科技類(lèi)的話(huà)題是命題熱點(diǎn)，大家可以在滬江搜寫(xiě)作科技類(lèi)話(huà)題詞 ，進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)哦~
?屠皓民領(lǐng)銜 四六級(jí)通關(guān)神器?
直播錄播相結(jié)合，基礎(chǔ)強(qiáng)化沖刺全包括
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