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四級真題范文（1）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a news report to your school newspaper on a volunteer activity organized by your Student Union to help elderly people in the neighborhood. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【審題分析】

本次作文題目選取了應(yīng)用文中的新聞報道，是考生不太熟悉的體裁。

從寫作要求的內(nèi)容來看，這是一篇記敘文，文章要求考生描述學(xué)生會組織的一項(xiàng)幫助社區(qū)老年人的志愿者活動，并進(jìn)行事件升華分析。

【寫作提綱】

開頭段：總結(jié)描述。點(diǎn)明本次志愿活動發(fā)生的時間、地點(diǎn)和參與人物等。

主體段：具體描述。大學(xué)生在幫助社區(qū)老年人的過程中做了第一件事（到達(dá)指定家庭并了解老人的需求）、第二件事（和老人一起出門游玩或在家中陪伴老人）、第三件事（幫助老人做清掃工作）。這些行為給老人們帶來了歡樂和溫暖。

結(jié)尾段：事件分析。本次志愿活動給我們留下了深刻的印象，我們應(yīng)該多多陪伴老人。

【寫作范文】

Help the Elderly in a Volunteer Activity

Last Saturday, a volunteer activity was organized by our Student Union with the intention of helping the elderly people in the neighborhood. It was such an unforgettable memory that I still remember the whole process vividly. (開頭段：總結(jié)描述）

55 volunteers involved were expected to go to the appointed families and help meet various needs of these aging persons. With our help, some old people were able to go to the places they wanted to visit, while other elderly individuals just enjoyed our company at home. We also cleaned the house, did some washing and fixed things for the elderly persons. I saw the sincere smile on their faces, and to me, it made everything worthwhile. （主體段：具體描述）

Whenever I look back on what happened that day, I think it is right to spend more time with the elderly. No one can deny that aging can be a difficult time for all the people. I will cherish all these memories forever.（結(jié)尾段：事件分析）

【范文翻譯】

幫助老年人志愿活動

上周六，為幫助社區(qū)老年人，學(xué)生會組織了一次志愿者活動。這對我來說是一次難忘的記憶，整個過程仍然歷歷在目。

55名志愿者如約前往指定的家庭，幫助滿足這些老年人的各種需求。在我們的幫助下，一些老人去了他們想去參觀的地方，另一些老年人也在我們的陪伴中度過了歡快的時光。我們還打掃了房子，為老人做了一些清洗和修理工作。他們的臉上露出了由衷的微笑，對我而言，這就使我們所做的一切都有意義了。

每當(dāng)我回想起那天所發(fā)生的一切，我都認(rèn)為多花時間陪伴老年人是正確的。衰老對所有人來說都是一段艱難的時光，這是無法否認(rèn)的，我會永遠(yuǎn)珍惜這段回憶。

【精彩句式】

① With our help, some old people were able to go to the places they wanted to visit, while other elderly individuals just enjoyed our company at home.

在我們的幫助下，一些老人去了他們想去參觀的地方，另一些老年人也在我們的陪伴中度過了歡快的時光。

② I saw the sincere smile on their faces, and to me, it made everything worthwhile.

他們的臉上露出了由衷的微笑，對我而言，這就使我們所做的一切都有意義了。

③ No one can deny that aging can be a difficult time for all the people.

衰老對所有人來說都是一段艱難的時光，這是無法否認(rèn)的。

【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】

be organized by ? 由…組織

with the intention of ? 抱有…目的

unforgettable ? adj. 難忘的

vividly ? adv. 生動地

appointed ? ?adj. 指定的

various ? adj. 多方面的

individual ? n. 個人

company ? n. 陪伴

sincere ? adj. 由衷的

worthwhile ? adj. 值得的

cherish ? v. 懷念

四級真題范文（2）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【審題分析】

這是一篇普通的論述型文章，是寫作中最?？嫉捏w裁。

從寫作要求的內(nèi)容來看，這是一篇對比選擇型的文章。畢業(yè)后的去向是大學(xué)生經(jīng)常思考的問題，該話題對考生而言并不陌生。文章要求考生在“找工作還是自主創(chuàng)業(yè)”中做出選擇，并闡釋選擇的原因。

審題的關(guān)鍵在于：find a job意為“找工作”；start a business of your own意為“自主創(chuàng)業(yè)”，明確主題詞，并在兩者中做出選擇。

【寫作提綱】

開頭段：描述現(xiàn)象，表明觀點(diǎn)。大學(xué)生畢業(yè)后會做出各種選擇，我傾向于直接工作。

主體段：分析原因。原因1：大學(xué)生涉世未深，缺乏工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，直接創(chuàng)業(yè)風(fēng)險大，可能導(dǎo)致失敗。而找工作相對容易，能積累經(jīng)驗(yàn)，資金。原因2：在工作中能夠提升自我，培養(yǎng)許多能力。

結(jié)尾段：總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)。沒有準(zhǔn)備好就去創(chuàng)業(yè)是不合適的，我會先在工作中積累經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

【寫作范文】

Finding a Job First

As the graduation season approaches, all college students will be in a dilemma between finding a job or starting their own business. Students’ opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some students hold that they should give priority to finding a job, yet the others disagree with it. As for me, I would rather find a job first.（描述現(xiàn)象，表明觀點(diǎn)）

The reasons for my decision are as follows. For one thing, starting a business always demands funds, experience and the market. It is much easier for the green hand just like me who has just graduated from the college to find a job first. For another, working for others could develop my personalities such as perseverance and stress tolerance, which can help me become more prepared and qualified if I would like to start my own business later.（分析原因）

In conclusion, chances always favor those who are fully prepared. And I don’t believe a person could really “build up from nothing”. As a result, I will find a job first after graduation.（總結(jié)全文，重申觀點(diǎn)）

【范文翻譯】

首先找到一份工作

隨著畢業(yè)季的來臨，很多大學(xué)生都將陷入是找工作抑或是自己創(chuàng)業(yè)這一進(jìn)退兩難的境地。不同的學(xué)生對此持不同意見，一些人認(rèn)為他們應(yīng)該優(yōu)先選擇找工作，而其他人則不認(rèn)同。至于我，我寧愿先找一份工作。

我做出這一決定的原因如下。首先，創(chuàng)業(yè)需要資金、經(jīng)驗(yàn)和市場。像我這樣剛從大學(xué)畢業(yè)的新人，找一份工作更容易。另一方面，為他人工作可以塑造我的性格，比如說毅力和抗壓能力，這能幫助我為之后的創(chuàng)業(yè)做好更充分的準(zhǔn)備。

總而言之，機(jī)會總是留給有準(zhǔn)備的人。我不認(rèn)為一個人真的可以“白手起家”。因此，畢業(yè)后我會先找一份工作。

【精彩句式】

① As the graduation season approaches, all college students will be in a dilemma between finding a job or starting their own business.

隨著畢業(yè)季的來臨，很多大學(xué)生都將陷入是找工作抑或是自己創(chuàng)業(yè)這一進(jìn)退兩難的境地。

② For another, working for others could develop my personalities such as perseverance and stress tolerance, which can help me become more prepared and qualified if I would like to start my own business later.

另一方面，為他人工作可以塑造我的性格，比如說毅力和抗壓能力，這能幫助我為之后的創(chuàng)業(yè)做好更充分的準(zhǔn)備。

③In conclusion, chances always favor those who are fully prepared.

總而言之，機(jī)會總是留給有準(zhǔn)備的人。

【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】

graduation season 畢業(yè)季

approach v. 走進(jìn)；臨近

dilemma n. 困境；進(jìn)退兩難

give priority to 優(yōu)先考慮；認(rèn)為優(yōu)先

demand v. 強(qiáng)烈要求；需要

perseverance n. 耐性；毅力

tolerance n. 寬容；容忍

prepared adj. 準(zhǔn)備好的

qualified adj. 合格的；有資格的

build up from nothing 白手起家

四級真題范文（3）

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any family members upon making memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【審題分析】

該篇文章為應(yīng)用文中的書信類（letter）寫作，從寫作要求的內(nèi)容來看，這是寫給父母或其他一位家庭成員的一封感謝信，主要感謝他在自己在取得成就過程中的幫助。

寫作中可選擇父親節(jié)、母親節(jié)等節(jié)日，就某一項(xiàng)成就對他們表達(dá)感恩之情。

寫作要注意書信的格式：

1. 書信正文應(yīng)有稱謂（開頭寫收信人，落款寫寫信人），及結(jié)束語；

2. 稱謂后的標(biāo)點(diǎn)為逗號。

【寫作提綱】

開頭段：開門見山，表明寫信目的：向父母或其他家庭成員在自己的某項(xiàng)成就中付出的幫助表示感謝（范文選取父親支持自己到山區(qū)旅行的經(jīng)歷）。

主體段：具體闡述感謝的內(nèi)容，在去山區(qū)旅行過程中，父親的支持與幫助。首先，父親支持自己追求興趣愛好：支持自己選擇有挑戰(zhàn)性的事；第二，父親對自己的教導(dǎo)：在艱苦環(huán)境中要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)；第三，在自己生病時，父親及時趕到：父親深深的愛。

結(jié)尾段：這次經(jīng)歷的收獲，再次向父親表達(dá)感恩之情，感謝父親讓自己成長。

【寫作范文】

Dear Dad,

Father’s Day is around the corner, ( 四級考試時間在父親節(jié)前后，適時選擇這樣的開頭，可以給閱卷老師一個好印象) and I’m writing this letter to express my thanks and love to you for supporting me in travelling 50 miles to a remote mountainous area with my friends, which is an absolutely memorable achievement for me. (開門見山，表達(dá)感謝)

Firstly, thank you for believing me that I can take good care of myself and supporting me for such a challenging thing, which made this experience possible. ?(支持自己的決定)?

Secondly, I’d like to thank you for your encouragement when I went through the tough living conditions there. It was you who told me about learning from hardships, which not only made me ashamed of myself but also inspired me to hold on. (教導(dǎo)自己要堅(jiān)強(qiáng))?

Last but not least, thank you for visiting me immediately when you heard that I became seriously ill during the travel.(生病及時趕到) Not until that time did I realize how important I am in your heart.

I became much more mature after this experience. More importantly, I got to know what a great father I have.(體現(xiàn)父女之情)?

Thank you for teaching me to grow up. Love you!

Yours,

? ? ? Daisy

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【范文翻譯】

親愛的爸爸：

隨著父親將至，我想借此信表達(dá)對您的感謝，感謝您對于我和朋友們?nèi)?0 英里外的山區(qū)旅行的支持，這段經(jīng)歷讓我終生難忘。

首先，感謝您相信我能夠照顧好自己，支持我做有挑戰(zhàn)的事情，這些信任和支持對于我的旅行經(jīng)歷不可或缺。

其次，感謝您在我生活條件困難的時候給予我鼓勵。您告訴我不僅要從讓我感到窘迫的困境中學(xué)習(xí)，也要從中獲取激勵，堅(jiān)持下去。

最后，感謝您在我旅行期間生病時及時探望我。直到那時，我才意識到我在您心中多么重要。

通過這段經(jīng)歷，我變得更加成熟。更重要的是，我知道我有一個多么偉大的父親。感謝您教會我成長。愛你！

您的女兒，

黛西

【精彩句式】

①Father’s Day is around the corner, and I’m writing this letter to express my thanks and love to you for supporting me in travelling 50 miles to a remote mountainous area with my friends, which is an absolutely memorable achievement for me.

隨著父親將至，我想借此信表達(dá)對您的感謝，感謝您對于我和朋友們?nèi)?0 英里外的山區(qū)旅行的支持，這段經(jīng)歷讓我終生難忘。

②Firstly, thank you for believing me that I can take good care of myself and supporting me for such a challenging thing, which made this experience possible.

首先，感謝您相信我能夠照顧好自己，支持我做有挑戰(zhàn)的事情，這些信任和支持對于我的旅行經(jīng)歷不可或缺。

③It was you who told me about learning from hardships, which not only made me ashamed of myself but also inspired me to hold on.

您告訴我不僅要從讓我感到窘迫的困境中學(xué)習(xí)，也要從中獲取激勵，堅(jiān)持下去。

④Not until that time did I realize how important I am in your heart.

直到那時，我才意識到我在您心中多么重要。

【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】

around the corner 即將來臨

remote adj. 遙遠(yuǎn)的；偏僻的

mountainous adj. 多山的

memorable adj. 難忘的

challenging adj. 挑戰(zhàn)性的

encouragement n. 鼓勵

be ashamed of 為…感到慚愧

hold on 堅(jiān)持

immediately adv. 立即；立刻

mature adj. 成熟的