滬江英語綠寶書之2010年12月大學(xué)英語四級考試 作文范文及解析

How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent

Nowadays, there is a growing concern over such a phenomenon, that is, some parents take care of almost everything concerned with their children, including study, work and marriage. Some parents believe that this is love, however, it is only to destroy children’s independence thoroughly.

For the future of the next generation, more efforts should be made by parents to help their children to be independent. The fundamental one is to cultivate the awareness, namely, the importance and necessity of being independent, which is supposed to begin from childhood. Children should be taught that no one can be stronger and more helpful than themselves in this world.

The quality of independence is so indispensable for us that parents had better act as a tutor, not a dictator. And only with parents' trust, can the next generation accumulate confidence step by step.

今年的作文主題非常貼近考生的生活，給了考生很大的發(fā)揮空間，擅長寫日常生活細節(jié)的學(xué)生可以寫上三五個句子勾勒父母對于子女的過度關(guān)愛，而擅長邏輯思考的學(xué)生則可以更多地闡述父母怎樣的行為才可以培養(yǎng)子女獨立的品格，而過度寵愛正導(dǎo)致了獨立精神的消失。

從具體操作的角度來說，對于基礎(chǔ)較為薄弱的考生，這次的考試題目是比較容易套用模板的，第一段，把現(xiàn)實狀況描述清楚；第二段，寫清楚父母親幫助子女獨立的策略；第三段，呼吁父母親多給自己一些自由。怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點)

滬江考前模板專題里面關(guān)于解決問題類作文提到了類似的結(jié)構(gòu)：
In recent days, we have to face a problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. ----(說明A的現(xiàn)狀)．
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解決方法一). For another -------------(解決方法二). Finally, --------------(解決方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解決方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(帶來的好處).
像這樣子的模板能夠幫助無話可說，或者說英語表達能力比較弱的同學(xué)迅速找到思路，只需要填入關(guān)鍵的字詞就可以完成作文。

但是對于能夠用流暢的英語表達自己的思路的同學(xué)來說，寫作如果希望取得比較高的分數(shù)，則需要注意語言必須盡可能簡潔才能夠在規(guī)定字數(shù)以內(nèi)說清楚自己的論點，而句子的表達要求，也從有話可說，上升到言之有理，甚至上升到語言精致優(yōu)美，內(nèi)在邏輯嚴密的高度了。

在我們給出大家的這篇范文里面，三段文字結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言簡明優(yōu)美又沒有落入模板的窠臼，屬于在臨場作文中的優(yōu)秀之作。

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