題目：Test for National Civil Servants?

寫作要求

In recent years, there is a trend of people taking the test for national civil servants, and?among them a large percentage is the high-educated. What do you think are the reasons behind?this craze? And what’s your view of this craze?

Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

Test for National Civil Servants

You are to write in three parts.

In the ? rst part, state speci? cally what your idea is.

In the second part, provide reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to?follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

審題思路

本題是現(xiàn)象解釋說 明/結(jié)果預(yù)測型的題目，探討為什么那么多人（尤其是高知識(shí)人群）選擇考公務(wù)員 ，并給出自己的觀點(diǎn)?？梢詮囊韵聨追矫嬷郑?/p>

1. 原因方面 ：可以從考生的角度來講 ，也可以從公務(wù)員的特點(diǎn)來講，還可以從社會(huì)輿論趨勢來講 ，當(dāng)然也可以綜合起來講；

2. 觀點(diǎn)方面 ：可以說明自己認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該跟隨這一熱潮并簡單說明理由，也可以說明自己對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象的未來趨勢的看法并簡單說明理由。

范文賞析

Test for National Civil Servants

In recent years, there have been more and more people who have participated in the test for national civil servants. And among them, the highly-educated, like masters and doctors, take quite a large percentage. The craze in civil servant test has attracted widespread attention. Personally , among all the factors that account for this trend, the following are worth mentioning.

引言部分 ：作者先交代背景知識(shí) ，注意這里不是照搬題干的內(nèi)容，而是換種說法（如果題 干部分的內(nèi)容較多，可以進(jìn)行簡單的概述 ），然后用personally引出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

Above all, nowadays college students face great employment pressure. Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions in today’s China, becomes their preferable choice. Moreover, in recent years, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which undoubtedly attracts many people. Besides, the high social status of civil servants is an important factor drawing many people to take part in the civil servant test.

主體部分：作者從學(xué)生的就業(yè)壓力、公務(wù)員的福利薪資和社會(huì)地位三個(gè)方面說明國考熱的原 因。連接詞分別使用了above all ，moreover和besides ，當(dāng)然也可以使用firstly，secondly ，and lastly等。

In my opinion, this fad in civil servant test will continue in the following years. However, in the long run, it doesn’t do good to the development of the nation. If most high quality talents???? gather in the government departments, it might lead to a waste of resources. Therefore, both the individuals and the government should have a more objective recognition of the civil servant test craze.

總結(jié)部分 ：作者用in my opinion來引出自己對(duì)國考熱的預(yù)測：國考熱會(huì)繼續(xù)，但是從長期 的角度來說，對(duì)國家的發(fā)展是不利的，因此政府和個(gè)人都應(yīng)該更客觀地看待這個(gè)事情。整個(gè)文章都體現(xiàn)了一種客觀的思考 ，文風(fēng)正式穩(wěn)健。

亮點(diǎn)回放

1.? the highly-educated : “受過高等教育的人”；近義詞可以用people receiving higher education ，反義詞為the poorly-educated。

2.? craze:“狂熱 ，風(fēng) 尚” ；下文 中還用了幾個(gè)近義詞trend ，fad ，使文章富有變化性 。

3.? personally : “就個(gè)人而言” ；常用 的近義詞有from my perspective ，in my view ，from my point of view ，as far as I m concerned等 。

4.? account for: “說明（原因 ）”；此處還可以使用be responsible for ，explain等 。

5.? stable:? “穩(wěn)定 的” ；常用于詞組long-term peace and stability? （長治久安 ）。

6.? preferable: “更好 的，更合意的” ；此處也可以使用desirable來替換 。

7.? social status:? “社會(huì)地位” ；status還常用于詞組financial? status? （財(cái)務(wù)狀況 ）, marital status? （婚姻狀況 ）等 。

8.? fad:? “時(shí)尚，一時(shí)的狂熱” ；與上文的craze ，trend為近義詞 。

9.? in the long run:? “長期來說”；近義詞可以用in the long term，反義詞為in the short run 。

10. talent: “人才” ；也可以用talented people或people of talent來替代 。

11. recognition:“承認(rèn)，認(rèn)識(shí)”；此處也可以用understanding來替代 。