商務(wù)英語翻譯賞析NO.3
2011-03-02 10:30
【原文】?jī)?nèi)地的改革開放促進(jìn)了于港澳地區(qū)的經(jīng)濟(jì)關(guān)系,除了貿(mào)易外,還在相互的資金、生產(chǎn)和技術(shù)合作與交流規(guī)模上不斷擴(kuò)大和深化,使得兩地經(jīng)濟(jì)聯(lián)系突破傳統(tǒng)的貿(mào)易單一格局,呈現(xiàn)出多元化發(fā)展的趨勢(shì)。
【譯文】The open-up policy and reforms adopted in the Chinese mainland have spurred its economic links with Hong Kong and Macao.These links have been strengthened through the introduction of capital and technology transfer,which is a breakthrough in the traditional trading relationship.
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【點(diǎn)評(píng)】銜接對(duì)語篇的連貫起重要作用,翻譯時(shí)不可不注意句與句之間的銜接。銜接可依靠詞匯手段和句法手段來進(jìn)行,詞匯手段包括詞語的重復(fù)、指代、省略、替代等。本例中漢語原文包含兩層意思,第一層意思是內(nèi)地的改革開放對(duì)大陸與港澳地區(qū)經(jīng)濟(jì)關(guān)系的促進(jìn),英譯文以一句譯出,將“theeconomic links”作謂語動(dòng)詞“spur”的賓語。在翻譯第二層意思時(shí),譯文承上啟下,以重復(fù)“These links”的辦法將第二句同第一句密切地銜接起來,使得譯文前后貫通,過度自然。